[CPWG] ALAC EPDP Statement Addendum - v03

[Jonathan Zuck]

Well trepidation was meant to mirror, not doing it lightly. I think there's been plenty of trepidation about saying nothing is better than something but it's your draft. Sorry if I changed the meaning anywhere. Not my intention. Mostly just removed passive voice.

Jonathan Zuck
Executive Director
Innovators Network Foundation
www.InnovatorsNetwork.org<http://www.InnovatorsNetwork.org>

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From: Alan Greenberg <greenberg.alan at gmail.com>
Sent: Friday, August 21, 2020 1:03:43 AM
To: Jonathan Zuck <JZuck at innovatorsnetwork.org>; Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca>; Matthias M. Hudobnik <matthias at hudobnik.at>
Cc: CPWG <cpwg at icann.org>
Subject: Re: [CPWG] ALAC EPDP Statement Addendum - v03

Thanks Jonathan,

Unfortunately in a several of places, your
revision changes the meaning/intent. I'll send a
revision merging the two shortly. Hopefully the final version.

As an aside, I have not sensed any "trepidation"
in our community. Sadness and regret that it has
come to this is more what I have felt.

Alan

At 2020-08-20 11:04 AM, Jonathan Zuck wrote:
>When you mentioned grammarians, I couldn't
>resist so I did a full edit. I hope it's helpful.
>
>=======================
>The members of the At-Large Advisory Committee
>(ALAC) appreciate the opportunity to submit this
>addendum to the statement that was submitted on 29 July 2020.
>
>The ALAC, along with its EPDP team, has reviewed
>and discussed the statements submitted by the
>BC/IPC, the consensus positions submitted by the
>GAC and SSAC and comments submitted by the other EPDP Member groups.
>
>Although the ALAC statement differs in approach,
>the ALAC is in general agreement with the
>positions taken by the GAC, SSAC and
>BC/IPC.  The ALAC has chosen to dissent with the
>recommendations, that required a year of heated
>debate to produce, with some trepidation.
>However, proceeding without addressing the
>issues that, we believe, are critical to the
>success of an SSAD will result in a system that
>will not meet needs of SSAD users nor provide
>the mechanism to resolve those deficiencies in
>the future. We hope that the GNSO and, if
>necessary, the Board will consider these
>unresolved issues as this approval process moves forward.
>========================
>
>On 8/20/20, 10:41 AM, "CPWG on behalf of Alan
>Greenberg" <cpwg-bounces at icann.org on behalf of
>alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca> wrote:
>
>     I think that DEBATE is correct in this case. As in the title of this
>     Wall Street Journal article - After Years of Debate -
>
>https://www.wsj.com/articles/after-years-of-debate-confederate-symbols-disappear-quickly-11591905565.
>
>     Any grammarians out there??
>
>     Alan
>
>     At 2020-08-20 03:32 AM, Matthias M. Hudobnik wrote:
>     >Thanks Alan!
>     >
>     >Just a minor change recommendation from my side:
>
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