[CPWG] ACTION/CPWG by Dec 8 - Final Feedback on Responses re: ALAC Advice on EPDP Phase 2 (SSAD)

[Alan Greenberg]

Hi Evin,

Please give me editing rights to the Google Doc. 
Once Hadia and I have agreed upon a draft I will transfer it there.

Alan


At 2021-12-06 09:44 AM, Evin Erdogdu wrote:

>Hello Hadia and Alan,
>
>
>Thank you for clarifying the timeline and 
>presentation shared on CPWG vs the draft between 
>you and Hadia. We can relay any updates to the 
>CPWG this week, please let us know.
>
>
>Best,
>
>Evin
>
>----------
>From: Hadia Abdelsalam Mokhtar EL miniawi <Hadia at tra.gov.eg>
>Sent: Monday, December 6, 2021 7:34:15 AM
>To: Alan Greenberg; Evin Erdogdu; cpwg at icann.org
>Cc: ICANN At-Large Staff; Olivier MJ Crépin-Leblond; Jonathan Zuck
>Subject: [Ext] RE: ACTION/CPWG by Dec 8 - Final 
>Feedback on Responses re: ALAC Advice on EPDP Phase 2 (SSAD)
>
>Alan, correct I did not include any of your text 
>nor did I delete anything I just added my own. 
>Let’s work on it together. I am available today 
>until 14:00 UTC then I am available again from 
>21:00 UTC ( I think this time might work better 
>for you) alternatively tomorrow I am available for most of the day and evening
>
>Best
>Hadia
>
>From: Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca>
>Sent: Monday, December 6, 2021 6:53 AM
>To: Evin Erdogdu <evin.erdogdu at icann.org>; cpwg at icann.org
>Cc: ICANN At-Large Staff 
><staff at atlarge.icann.org>; Hadia Abdelsalam 
>Mokhtar EL miniawi <Hadia at tra.gov.eg>; Olivier 
>MJ Crépin-Leblond <ocl at gih.com>; Jonathan Zuck <JZuck at innovatorsnetwork.org>
>Subject: Re: ACTION/CPWG by Dec 8 - Final 
>Feedback on Responses re: ALAC Advice on EPDP Phase 2 (SSAD)
>
>Evin and Hadia,
>
>I am rather confused.
>
>First, I do not recall agreeing that we will finalize the responses this week.
>
>Second, I prepared some text as the first draft. 
>Parts of it are in the Google Doc, and parts are 
>missing. I have suggest only access to this 
>document and cannot look at its history, but it 
>appears that Hadia added some text but not 
>deleted any, so where did my text go?
>
>I think what happened is that Evin took my 
>PowerPoint presentation (and not the fully 
>fleshed out responses I sent to Hadia) and 
>presumed that these short-hand presentation 
>slides were the responses to the Board. And then 
>Hadia added some additional text.
>
>This is not satisfactory! I suggest that we put 
>this on hold until Hadia and I can formulate 
>something that fully addresses all of the issues.
>
>Alan
>
>
>
>
>At 2021-12-03 06:42 PM, Evin Erdogdu wrote:
>
>
>Hello CPWG Members,
>
>
>As per the 
><https://community.icann.org/x/coPOCg>1 December 
>meeting, please finally review responses to the 
>Board clarifying questions regarding the ALAC advice on EPDP Phase 2 (SSAD):
>
>
>See: 
><https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wgbaQJjw6c6dQ6FPgNrsJ4pgEnBCdoWncY6BNnJ4ktI/edit?usp=sharing__;!!PtGJab4!sr5vnEeW1nc5GJjdzrC8lIVcjKMiVRSCm3p-aaq2FoLVp12_ZRkOSeQ9KrpjEITO7nvU5_ehLQ$>https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wgbaQJjw6c6dQ6FPgNrsJ4pgEnBCdoWncY6BNnJ4ktI/edit?usp=sharing 
>[docs.google.com]
>
>
>On 8 December Alan and Hadia will finalize the 
>responses with feedback with the CPWG, with the 
>goal of providing final responses to Board the following week, in mid-December.
>
>
>Thank you,
>
>
>Evin Ashley Erdo»du
>
>Policy Analyst
>
>Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN)
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