[CPWG] DRAFT Comment on EC NIS2 Proposal

[Laurin B Weissinger]

Dear Alan and all,

The response is well written as is but unfortunately too long — I made some comments on where cuts might be possible without compromising the text too much.

All the best
Laurin

> On Mar 10, 2021, at 09:50, Alan Greenberg via CPWG <cpwg at icann.org> wrote:
>
> Thanks to Justine for correcting a number of typos. A revised version
> is attached.
>
> HOWEVER, I just checked the submission procedure and apparently
> comments are limited to 4000 characters, so this will need to be
> significantly reduced.
>
> Also, apparently the deadline is not next Monday, but next Thursday,
> so we have a bit more time.
>
> Alan
>
> At 2021-03-10 12:27 AM, Alan Greenberg wrote:
>> Attached is the draft ALAC comment on the EC NIS2 Proposal.
>>
>> It is also posted on the Wiki at
>> https://community.icann.org/x/zINeCQ, and I have created a Google
>> Doc as well
>> (https://docs.google.com/document/d/16oJtYMv1mjKQpvL_H_LmOYdKRmxerEF66L4Gc5AL28Q/).
>> In the Google Doc please limit yourself to COMMENTS and not
>> suggested edits to. Comments via e-mail also welcome, but please
>> prefix any comment SUBJECT line with NIS2 to ensure I don't miss it.
>>
>> I will be discussing it on today's CPWG call.
>>
>> The deadline for submission to the European Commission is next
>> Monday, 15 March. Accordingly my intent is to finalize this tomorrow
>> (Thursday) for consideration of the ALAC (subject to final editing).
>>
>> Maureen will let the ALAC know the details of how they will consider it.
>>
>> Alan
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