[CPWG] Minor changes to EPDP Board replies

[gopal at annauniv.edu]

Dear Dr. Alan Greenberg,

Your edits are fine with me.

It has been my pleasure interacting with you as the work on this
document progressed.

As you would appreciate, these efforts stand justified when the clear 
thinking
of the stakeholders becomes visible.

Sincerely,



Gopal T V
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On 2022-01-10 22:02, Alan Greenberg via CPWG wrote:
> Holly identified two problems with the Replies currently before the 
> ALAC.
> 
> 1. In the first paragraph of the reply to Question 1, the word
> "proscriptive" was used instead of "prescriptive". I have corrected
> this error.
> 
> 2. In the 2nd sentence of the reply to Question 3, Holly commented
> that the meaning of the sentence was not clear. I have simplified it
> changing
> 
>    "Ultimately the adopted Directive will need to factor in the input
> the various EU bodies are receiving as well as being the result of
> negotiations between the EU Parliament and Council."
> 
> to
> 
>    "The Directive eventually adopted by the EU will need to factor
> comments received as well as being the result of negotiations between
> the EU Parliament and Council."
> 
> Neither of these changes alters the intent and meaning of the
> responses and I suggest that they be incorporated.
> 
> Alan
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