[CPWG] Minor changes to EPDP Board replies

[Hadia Abdelsalam Mokhtar EL miniawi]

I would just note that “proscriptive” was not an error in the statement. We meant to say that the ALAC does not want to forbid the board from taking a certain action. Proscriptive has a different meaning than prescriptive and was intentionally put that is it is not a mistake. However, the statement is also open to any  change in content the  message delivered, no restrictions. 

Hadia 

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> On 11 Jan 2022, at 7:56 AM, gopal--- via CPWG <cpwg at icann.org> wrote:
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> Dear Dr. Alan Greenberg,
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> Your edits are fine with me.
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> It has been my pleasure interacting with you as the work on this
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> As you would appreciate, these efforts stand justified when the clear thinking
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>> On 2022-01-10 22:02, Alan Greenberg via CPWG wrote:
>> Holly identified two problems with the Replies currently before the ALAC.
>> 1. In the first paragraph of the reply to Question 1, the word
>> "proscriptive" was used instead of "prescriptive". I have corrected
>> this error.
>> 2. In the 2nd sentence of the reply to Question 3, Holly commented
>> that the meaning of the sentence was not clear. I have simplified it
>> changing
>>   "Ultimately the adopted Directive will need to factor in the input
>> the various EU bodies are receiving as well as being the result of
>> negotiations between the EU Parliament and Council."
>> to
>>   "The Directive eventually adopted by the EU will need to factor
>> comments received as well as being the result of negotiations between
>> the EU Parliament and Council."
>> Neither of these changes alters the intent and meaning of the
>> responses and I suggest that they be incorporated.
>> Alan
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