[CPWG] Minor changes to EPDP Board replies

[Alan Greenberg]

I did consider that, but "proscriptive" means we 
are not going to (try to) forbid some actions, 
while "prescriptive" has a wider meaning of not 
attempting to limit what the do or not do, subject to our advice.

Alan


At 2022-01-11 04:37 AM, Hadia Abdelsalam Mokhtar EL miniawi wrote:
>I would just note that â?oproscriptiveâ? was 
>not an error in the statement. We meant to say 
>that the ALAC does not want to forbid the board 
>from taking a certain action. Proscriptive has a 
>different meaning than prescriptive and was 
>intentionally put that is it is not a mistake. 
>However, the statement is also open to 
>any  change in content the  message delivered, no restrictions.
>
>Hadia
>
>Sent from my iPhone
>
> > On 11 Jan 2022, at 7:56 AM, gopal--- via CPWG <cpwg at icann.org> wrote:
> >
> > Dear Dr. Alan Greenberg,
> >
> > Your edits are fine with me.
> >
> > It has been my pleasure interacting with you as the work on this
> > document progressed.
> >
> > As you would appreciate, these efforts stand 
> justified when the clear thinking
> > of the stakeholders becomes visible.
> >
> > Sincerely,
> >
> >
> >
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> >> On 2022-01-10 22:02, Alan Greenberg via CPWG wrote:
> >> Holly identified two problems with the Replies currently before the ALAC.
> >> 1. In the first paragraph of the reply to Question 1, the word
> >> "proscriptive" was used instead of "prescriptive". I have corrected
> >> this error.
> >> 2. In the 2nd sentence of the reply to Question 3, Holly commented
> >> that the meaning of the sentence was not clear. I have simplified it
> >> changing
> >>   "Ultimately the adopted Directive will need to factor in the input
> >> the various EU bodies are receiving as well as being the result of
> >> negotiations between the EU Parliament and Council."
> >> to
> >>   "The Directive eventually adopted by the EU will need to factor
> >> comments received as well as being the result of negotiations between
> >> the EU Parliament and Council."
> >> Neither of these changes alters the intent and meaning of the
> >> responses and I suggest that they be incorporated.
> >> Alan
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