[CWG-Stewardship] Comments to Final Draft

[Grace Abuhamad]

Thanks Greg. I just saw your note about section numbering. We lightened up on the section numbering when we introduced paragraph numbering into the draft. I can check/cross reference the term sheet to the final if this is still an issue (I haven't looked at your draft yet). 

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> On Jun 10, 2015, at 20:09, Greg Shatan <gregshatanipc at gmail.com> wrote:
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> All:
> 
> I've made a few changes to the Term Sheet section, including shortening the section on trademarks and putting it in brackets to further signify that it's an open point.  Also made some formatting changes (including having the headers on every page).
> 
> Greg
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