[CWG-Stewardship] Principles and Criteria that Should Underpin Decisions on the Transition of NTIA Stewardship: New Draft

[Avri Doria]

Hi,

 One small comment:

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> would be required to achieve consensus.
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Since consensus is such a loose term, might be good to specify 'ICANN
Consensus', which is process dependent and is not full consensus, as
opposed to just consensus.

thanks

avri

On 04-Mar-15 23:58, Martin Boyle wrote:
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> Hi all,
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> And special thanks to Elise and Paul for their cooperation on g.ii
> (now 7.ii), Stephanie for some useful proposed wording for j (now 10),
> Maarten Simon for some comments and suggested edits and Erick for some
> interesting discussion on h.ii (now 8.ii).
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> The result is perhaps a slightly more complicated document that it was
> on Tuesday evening! 
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> I propose that we look to:
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> ·         Remove all the comments and accept all the editing that has
> not had any comment that is the side heading and paragraphs (using the
> new numbering) 2, 3, 5.i, 5.iv, 6.ii, 7 chapeau, 7.iii-vi, 8.i, 8.iii
> and 9.
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> ·         See whether the suggested compromise on 7.ii is acceptable.
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> ·         See whether the proposed text in 5.iii is acceptable.
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> ·         In the light of Maarten’s comment on 5.vi, check whether
> maintaining the current text (including removing the square brackets)
> is acceptable.
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> ·         See whether 6.iii should be retained and whether there is
> consensus to remove the square brackets.
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> ·         See if the edits proposed for 7.i are acceptable.
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> ·         See if Stephanie’s proposal for 10 is acceptable.
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> If we have time I’d like to at least ask Erick to introduce the
> alternative he has proposed for 8.ii.  However, it is not proving to
> be an easy discussion so I propose to take this discussion off line as
> there is unlikely to be any resolution in time for or during
> tomorrow’s call.
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> Thanks and I look forward to a constructive discussion tomorrow.
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> Martin
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