[CWG-Stewardship] Fwd: [client com] FW: Revised Community Agreement Draft: 08-05-2016

Sun Aug 7 15:28:53 UTC 2016

I don't know whetheer you will get that before tomorrow, and that is
really rather late.  Can you at least say what your concerns are?
There really isn't a lot of time: this needs to go to public comment
on Thursday.  An additional day to wait for the comments would be bad.

Best regards,

A

On Sun, Aug 07, 2016 at 05:14:50PM +0200, Kavouss Arasteh wrote:
> Seun,
> I know that a word version was included but the Word Version is a clean
> Text and it is difficult to identify the changes .I wish to see what was
> the changes introduced by Greg
> I still need the red mark text in WORD VERSION.
> Regards
> Kavouss
> 
> 2016-08-07 14:09 GMT+02:00 Seun Ojedeji <seun.ojedeji at gmail.com>:
> 
> > A word version was included in Greg's mail
> >
> > Regards
> >
> > Sent from my LG G4
> > Kindly excuse brevity and typos
> >
> > On 7 Aug 2016 10:36 a.m., "Kavouss Arasteh" <kavouss.arasteh at gmail.com>
> > wrote:
> >
> >> Grec,
> >> Thank you very much for the amendments. I do not agree with some of them
> >> In order to enable me to provide my counter comments to you, pls provide
> >> a word version of your amendment as soon as convinient
> >> Regards
> >> Kavouss
> >>
> >>
> >> 2016-08-07 0:22 GMT+02:00 Greg Shatan <gregshatanipc at gmail.com>:
> >>
> >>> CWG,
> >>>
> >>> I am forwarding a revised draft of the proposed Community Agreement
> >>> relating to the IANA IPR.  In addition to any other comments you may have,
> >>> I draw your attention to the two specific items in the email below: (1)
> >>> identifying an entity to sign for the names community, and (2) providing a
> >>> brief description of the IANA Services used by the names community (
> >>> *see* Exhibit A for descriptions provided by the other communities).
> >>>
> >>> This will be the subject of further refinement by the IPR collaborative
> >>> group early in the week, with the goal of initiating a public comment
> >>> period as soon as possible after the CWG-IANA meeting on Thursday.
> >>>
> >>> Greg
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> ---------- Forwarded message ----------
> >>> From: Hofheimer, Joshua T. <jhofheimer at sidley.com>
> >>> Date: Sat, Aug 6, 2016 at 4:55 PM
> >>> Subject: [client com] FW: Revised Community Agreement Draft: 08-05-2016
> >>> To: Client <cwg-client at icann.org>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> Dear Client Committee,
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> Attached please find a revised draft of the proposed Community Agreement
> >>> for your review and comment.  This is an iterative version prepared jointly
> >>> by counsel (Sidley) to the CWG and counsel to the IETF Trust to reflect the
> >>> 7-point discussion items.  To be clear, it is still a work in progress, but
> >>> we believe ready for the CWG to have an opportunity for review.
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> Two important issues to highlight:
> >>>
> >>> 1) the Names Community needs to determine who will be the signatory
> >>> party, acting on behalf of the Names Community, to the Community
> >>> Agreement.  For your information, the attached draft has the organizations
> >>> put forward to represent the Numbers and Protocols Communities; and
> >>>
> >>> 2) we need a brief description of the IANA services to be provided on
> >>> behalf of the Names Community.  The following high-level description was
> >>> included in a draft of the Naming Functions Agreement.  If this is
> >>> acceptable for including here is well, please advise (or we ask the Client
> >>> Committee to provide a sufficient description):
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> The “*IANA Naming Function*” is comprised of:
> >>>
> >>> (a)             Management of the DNS Root Zone (“*Root Zone Management*
> >>> ”);
> >>>
> >>> (b)             Management of the .INT top-level domain;
> >>>
> >>> (c)              Maintenance of a repository of internationalized
> >>> domain name tables and label generation rule sets; and
> >>>
> >>> (d)             Provision of other services related to the management
> >>> of .INT top-level domains, at ICANN’s reasonable request and at ICANN’s
> >>> expense.
> >>>
> >>> Please provide any comment or feedback as soon as practical, as we are
> >>> trying to finalize the draft for approval by the various stakeholders and
> >>> release for public comment by Thursday.
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> Thank you in advance.
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> Cheers,
> >>>
> >>> Josh
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> *Joshua Hofheimer*
> >>>
> >>> *Sidley Austin LLP*
> >>>
> >>> *jhofheimer at sidley.com <jhofheimer at sidley.com>*
> >>>
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> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> *From:* iana-ipr-bounces at nro.net [mailto:iana-ipr-bounces at nro.net] *On
> >>> Behalf Of *Jorge Contreras
> >>> *Sent:* Friday, August 05, 2016 10:01 AM
> >>> *To:* iana-ipr at nro.net
> >>> *Subject:* [Iana-ipr] Revised Community Agreement Draft: 08-05-2016
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> All – attached is a draft of the Community Agreement that Josh and I
> >>> have collaborated on over the past two days.  We believe that it reflects
> >>> the current requirements of the parties, and submit it for your review and
> >>> discussion.
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> A clean version, as well as a marked version against the draft of
> >>> 07-30-16 (in PDF format) are attached.
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> Please note a few items that still need to be completed, including the
> >>> description of the IANA Names Service, the identities of the CCG
> >>> representatives, etc.
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> Best regards,
> >>>
> >>> Jorge
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> Jorge L. Contreras
> >>>
> >>> Contreras Legal Strategy LLC
> >>>
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