[CWG-Stewardship] Fwd: [client com] FW: Revised Community Agreement Draft: 08-05-2016

Sun Aug 7 15:14:50 UTC 2016

Seun,
I know that a word version was included but the Word Version is a clean
Text and it is difficult to identify the changes .I wish to see what was
the changes introduced by Greg
I still need the red mark text in WORD VERSION.
Regards
Kavouss

2016-08-07 14:09 GMT+02:00 Seun Ojedeji <seun.ojedeji at gmail.com>:

> A word version was included in Greg's mail
>
> Regards
>
> Sent from my LG G4
> Kindly excuse brevity and typos
>
> On 7 Aug 2016 10:36 a.m., "Kavouss Arasteh" <kavouss.arasteh at gmail.com>
> wrote:
>
>> Grec,
>> Thank you very much for the amendments. I do not agree with some of them
>> In order to enable me to provide my counter comments to you, pls provide
>> a word version of your amendment as soon as convinient
>> Regards
>> Kavouss
>>
>>
>> 2016-08-07 0:22 GMT+02:00 Greg Shatan <gregshatanipc at gmail.com>:
>>
>>> CWG,
>>>
>>> I am forwarding a revised draft of the proposed Community Agreement
>>> relating to the IANA IPR.  In addition to any other comments you may have,
>>> I draw your attention to the two specific items in the email below: (1)
>>> identifying an entity to sign for the names community, and (2) providing a
>>> brief description of the IANA Services used by the names community (
>>> *see* Exhibit A for descriptions provided by the other communities).
>>>
>>> This will be the subject of further refinement by the IPR collaborative
>>> group early in the week, with the goal of initiating a public comment
>>> period as soon as possible after the CWG-IANA meeting on Thursday.
>>>
>>> Greg
>>>
>>>
>>> ---------- Forwarded message ----------
>>> From: Hofheimer, Joshua T. <jhofheimer at sidley.com>
>>> Date: Sat, Aug 6, 2016 at 4:55 PM
>>> Subject: [client com] FW: Revised Community Agreement Draft: 08-05-2016
>>> To: Client <cwg-client at icann.org>
>>>
>>>
>>> Dear Client Committee,
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Attached please find a revised draft of the proposed Community Agreement
>>> for your review and comment.  This is an iterative version prepared jointly
>>> by counsel (Sidley) to the CWG and counsel to the IETF Trust to reflect the
>>> 7-point discussion items.  To be clear, it is still a work in progress, but
>>> we believe ready for the CWG to have an opportunity for review.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Two important issues to highlight:
>>>
>>> 1) the Names Community needs to determine who will be the signatory
>>> party, acting on behalf of the Names Community, to the Community
>>> Agreement.  For your information, the attached draft has the organizations
>>> put forward to represent the Numbers and Protocols Communities; and
>>>
>>> 2) we need a brief description of the IANA services to be provided on
>>> behalf of the Names Community.  The following high-level description was
>>> included in a draft of the Naming Functions Agreement.  If this is
>>> acceptable for including here is well, please advise (or we ask the Client
>>> Committee to provide a sufficient description):
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> The “*IANA Naming Function*” is comprised of:
>>>
>>> (a)             Management of the DNS Root Zone (“*Root Zone Management*
>>> ”);
>>>
>>> (b)             Management of the .INT top-level domain;
>>>
>>> (c)              Maintenance of a repository of internationalized
>>> domain name tables and label generation rule sets; and
>>>
>>> (d)             Provision of other services related to the management
>>> of .INT top-level domains, at ICANN’s reasonable request and at ICANN’s
>>> expense.
>>>
>>> Please provide any comment or feedback as soon as practical, as we are
>>> trying to finalize the draft for approval by the various stakeholders and
>>> release for public comment by Thursday.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Thank you in advance.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Cheers,
>>>
>>> Josh
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> *Joshua Hofheimer*
>>>
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>>>
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>>>
>>> *From:* iana-ipr-bounces at nro.net [mailto:iana-ipr-bounces at nro.net] *On
>>> Behalf Of *Jorge Contreras
>>> *Sent:* Friday, August 05, 2016 10:01 AM
>>> *To:* iana-ipr at nro.net
>>> *Subject:* [Iana-ipr] Revised Community Agreement Draft: 08-05-2016
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> All – attached is a draft of the Community Agreement that Josh and I
>>> have collaborated on over the past two days.  We believe that it reflects
>>> the current requirements of the parties, and submit it for your review and
>>> discussion.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> A clean version, as well as a marked version against the draft of
>>> 07-30-16 (in PDF format) are attached.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Please note a few items that still need to be completed, including the
>>> description of the IANA Names Service, the identities of the CCG
>>> representatives, etc.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Best regards,
>>>
>>> Jorge
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Jorge L. Contreras
>>>
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