[Gac-gnso-cg] revised version of the slide deck -- still plenty oftime for revisions before our next meeting

[Mike O'Connor]

hi Jonathan,

astounding!  i had no idea there was a way to put comments on a Powerpoint slide.  you’ve just rocked my world.  interestingly, all your comments show up with my name across the top.  a glitch.

i’m fine with your suggestions.  i’ve built on your version by slightly simplifying the graphic (just like with editing text, “less is better”) in a way that i’m hoping will improve comprehension.  it’s easy to roll back to the old versions if people don’t like these new ones.  i’ve attached that version.  

right Jonathan, the last two slides are examples of one of the ideas we’re thinking about on the Early Engagement track.  i would note that the second of those two slides is actual “content” that i would be loath to give up if the schedule gets compressed.  that’s a summary of “The Queue” — our hope with this slide is to give GAC members an actual alert that there are some PDPs that they may have a strong interest in.  and many of them are in the early stages — so they represent opportunities for early engagement in real life.  i’d cheerfully give up the second to the last slide, but would at least like to flash that last one in front of people.

thanks!

mikey





On Mar 17, 2014, at 4:41 AM, Jonathan Robinson <jonathan.robinson at ipracon.com> wrote:

> Many thanks Mikey for the bedrock of this work.
> Also Manal for the careful critique and input.
>  
> I have given it a “once over” and made a few minor suggested tweaks.
> Each is identified by a comment as my change tracking feature appeared to not work.
> Tweaked version is attached.
>  
> Thinking ahead to our meeting on Sunday:
>  
> 1.       Manal & I need to circle back with Heather and possibly others on what the scope / agenda of the meeting is.
> i.e. is it confined to the work of this group.
> 2.       In any case, thinking about only the work of this group, slides 1-10 are excellent on a stand-alone basis to describe the work of this group.
> Slide 10 ends with a series of discussion points / questions and that seems sensible.  The presentation will naturally pause there.
> 3.       I think I understand that slide 11 is then an the example of our early thinking and then slide 12 contains examples of current work that could be subject to process in slide 11.
> Correct?
>  
> Thanks again for the excellent work on this.
>  
>  
> Jonathan
>  
> From: gac-gnso-cg-bounces at icann.org [mailto:gac-gnso-cg-bounces at icann.org] On Behalf Of Manal Ismail
> Sent: 16 March 2014 14:29
> To: Mike O'Connor
> Cc: gac-gnso-cgs at icann.org
> Subject: Re: [Gac-gnso-cg] revised version of the slide deck -- still plenty oftime for revisions before our next meeting
>  
> Thanks Mikey for noting this ..
> I do support and appreciate your friendly amendment ..
> Kind Regards
> --Manal
>  
> From: Mike O'Connor [mailto:mike at haven2.com] 
> Sent: Sunday, March 16, 2014 2:45 PM
> To: Manal Ismail
> Cc: gac-gnso-cgs at icann.org
> Subject: Re: [Gac-gnso-cg] revised version of the slide deck -- still plenty oftime for revisions before our next meeting
>  
> hi all,
>  
> i’ve rolled all of this conversation up into a new draft of the slides.  there’s one remaining thing to note...
>  
> Manal noticed that “GNSO” doesn’t appear in on the title of the slide deck and added it.  but that title is also the title of our group and “GNSO” doesn’t appear there either. i almost went ahead and changed it in the Charter before i submitted it, but decided to check with the rest of you.  does everybody consider this a friendly amendment, as i do?  i left Manal’s addition highlighted in red on this version of the deck to remind us to just quickly dispense with that question on our call.
>  
> thanks,
>  
> mikey
>  
> <GAC-GNSO - Singapore v2 (JR Edit).pptx>


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