[Gdd-gnso-ppsai-impl] Please Review: PP IRT draft v1 redline of PSWG proposal attached

[Victoria Sheckler]

Apologies I will miss the call today

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> On Jun 20, 2017, at 5:27 AM, gtheo <gtheo at xs4all.nl> wrote:
> 
> Hi all,
> 
> Section 3.1.1 and 3.2.2 for now this language needs to go. LEA's and CPH's must address this issue in a different manner. We talked about setting up a database or some sorts in Dublin.
> 
> The LEA's have a hard time to reach the correct departments at the Registrars and Registries, and the CPH's have a hard time to identify all these LEA requests if they are legit or not, sometimes this process takes more than 72 hours, wich is insane, but sadly a reality.
> 
> This problem needs to be tackled and if executed well, you do not need sections like 3.1.1 and 3.2.2 in my opinion.
> 
> Best regards,
> 
> Theo Geurts
> 
> 
> 
> 
> Amy Bivins schreef op 2017-06-19 07:54 PM:
>> Thanks, Greg!
>> What do others think of these proposals?
>> I'll note that in 4.2.2.3, this language, including the word "will" is
>> copied from the text of the Final Report, p. 16 (last line before
>> "Deaccreditation and Its Consequences" section.
>> FROM: gdd-gnso-ppsai-impl-bounces at icann.org
>> [mailto:gdd-gnso-ppsai-impl-bounces at icann.org] ON BEHALF OF DiBiase,
>> Gregory via Gdd-gnso-ppsai-impl
>> SENT: Monday, June 19, 2017 1:35 PM
>> TO: gdd-gnso-ppsai-impl at icann.org
>> SUBJECT: Re: [Gdd-gnso-ppsai-impl] Please Review: PP IRT draft v1
>> redline of PSWG proposal attached
>> Hi Amy,
>> A couple more comments on the revised draft:
>> -        3.2.1: It's unclear if the two business day deadline for a
>> response applies to "High Priority Requests".  4.1.2 still says 24
>> hours for High Priority Requests to be "actioned".  We should revise
>> 4.1.2 to change the 24 hour period to two business days or revise
>> 3.2.1 to say "Except as provided in 4.1.2, within two business
>> days…"
>> -        4.2.2.3: Change "circumstances showing that disclosure _will
>> _endanger safety" to "circumstances showing that disclosure _may _
>> endanger safety"
>> Thanks,
>> Greg
>> FROM: gdd-gnso-ppsai-impl-bounces at icann.org
>> [mailto:gdd-gnso-ppsai-impl-bounces at icann.org] ON BEHALF OF Amy Bivins
>> SENT: Wednesday, June 14, 2017 8:10 AM
>> TO: gdd-gnso-ppsai-impl at icann.org
>> SUBJECT: [Gdd-gnso-ppsai-impl] Please Review: PP IRT draft v1 redline
>> of PSWG proposal attached
>> Dear Colleagues,
>> Thanks so much for your active participation on yesterday's call.
>> Pursuant to the IRT's discussion yesterday on the PSWG proposal, I'm
>> attaching a first draft of a markup of the PSWG proposal for your
>> review. Please review and provide any additional suggested edits or
>> comments that you would like to discuss on next week's call no later
>> than your EOD Monday (but earlier is better!).
>> I'm also attaching a summary of all of your comments from yesterday's
>> discussion, as well as a document detailing all of your prior input on
>> this proposal.
>> The goal is to finalize this discussion draft shortly after next
>> week's call (20 June) so that it can be distributed to the PSWG in
>> preparation for the IRT/PSWG meeting at ICANN59.
>> For those who could not attend, I encourage you to listen to the call
>> recording (available on the wiki,
>> https://participate.icann.org/p1zlpvjfw5i/). Unfortunately, there is a
>> problem with the last 10-12 minutes of the recording, with the host
>> and participant audio not recording in sync, but you can still hear
>> most of what was said during the meeting.
>> Best,
>> Amy
>> AMY E. BIVINS
>> Registrar Services and Engagement Senior Manager
>> Registrar Services and Industry Relations
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