[Gdd-gnso-ppsai-impl] Please Review: PP IRT draft v1 redline of PSWG proposal attached

[Amy Bivins]

Hi Theo,

We can discuss on the call today. I'm not sure how this would work to not have anything about an LEA contact in the framework so it would be great if you could share more about your thinking on the call.

Thanks!
Amy

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> On Jun 20, 2017, at 5:27 AM, gtheo <gtheo at xs4all.nl> wrote:
> 
> Hi all,
> 
> Section 3.1.1 and 3.2.2 for now this language needs to go. LEA's and CPH's must address this issue in a different manner. We talked about setting up a database or some sorts in Dublin.
> 
> The LEA's have a hard time to reach the correct departments at the Registrars and Registries, and the CPH's have a hard time to identify all these LEA requests if they are legit or not, sometimes this process takes more than 72 hours, wich is insane, but sadly a reality.
> 
> This problem needs to be tackled and if executed well, you do not need sections like 3.1.1 and 3.2.2 in my opinion.
> 
> Best regards,
> 
> Theo Geurts
> 
> 
> 
> 
> Amy Bivins schreef op 2017-06-19 07:54 PM:
>> Thanks, Greg!
>> What do others think of these proposals?
>> I'll note that in 4.2.2.3, this language, including the word "will" is
>> copied from the text of the Final Report, p. 16 (last line before
>> "Deaccreditation and Its Consequences" section.
>> FROM: gdd-gnso-ppsai-impl-bounces at icann.org
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>> Gregory via Gdd-gnso-ppsai-impl
>> SENT: Monday, June 19, 2017 1:35 PM
>> TO: gdd-gnso-ppsai-impl at icann.org
>> SUBJECT: Re: [Gdd-gnso-ppsai-impl] Please Review: PP IRT draft v1
>> redline of PSWG proposal attached
>> Hi Amy,
>> A couple more comments on the revised draft:
>> -        3.2.1: It's unclear if the two business day deadline for a
>> response applies to "High Priority Requests".  4.1.2 still says 24
>> hours for High Priority Requests to be "actioned".  We should revise
>> 4.1.2 to change the 24 hour period to two business days or revise
>> 3.2.1 to say "Except as provided in 4.1.2, within two business
>> days…"
>> -        4.2.2.3: Change "circumstances showing that disclosure _will
>> _endanger safety" to "circumstances showing that disclosure _may _
>> endanger safety"
>> Thanks,
>> Greg
>> FROM: gdd-gnso-ppsai-impl-bounces at icann.org
>> [mailto:gdd-gnso-ppsai-impl-bounces at icann.org] ON BEHALF OF Amy Bivins
>> SENT: Wednesday, June 14, 2017 8:10 AM
>> TO: gdd-gnso-ppsai-impl at icann.org
>> SUBJECT: [Gdd-gnso-ppsai-impl] Please Review: PP IRT draft v1 redline
>> of PSWG proposal attached
>> Dear Colleagues,
>> Thanks so much for your active participation on yesterday's call.
>> Pursuant to the IRT's discussion yesterday on the PSWG proposal, I'm
>> attaching a first draft of a markup of the PSWG proposal for your
>> review. Please review and provide any additional suggested edits or
>> comments that you would like to discuss on next week's call no later
>> than your EOD Monday (but earlier is better!).
>> I'm also attaching a summary of all of your comments from yesterday's
>> discussion, as well as a document detailing all of your prior input on
>> this proposal.
>> The goal is to finalize this discussion draft shortly after next
>> week's call (20 June) so that it can be distributed to the PSWG in
>> preparation for the IRT/PSWG meeting at ICANN59.
>> For those who could not attend, I encourage you to listen to the call
>> recording (available on the wiki,
>> https://participate.icann.org/p1zlpvjfw5i/). Unfortunately, there is a
>> problem with the last 10-12 minutes of the recording, with the host
>> and participant audio not recording in sync, but you can still hear
>> most of what was said during the meeting.
>> Best,
>> Amy
>> AMY E. BIVINS
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