[Gnso-epdp-team] Section 4 of Temp Spec.
kavouss.arasteh at gmail.com
Fri Aug 31 13:56:29 UTC 2018
Dear All, Sorry I forgot to mention one important point to faciltate the
review of proposed amendment
Should any text be amended the part/ parts deteled must be shown with
redline and the part added with underlined approach.
This would facilitate the review of the expected revision
On Fri, Aug 31, 2018 at 12:19 PM Ayden Férdeline <icann at ferdeline.com>
> Dear all,
> I support the call for drafts to be made available at least 48 hours in
> advance of the call.
> Thank you,
> Ayden Férdeline
> > On 31 Aug 2018, at 11:43, Kavouss Arasteh <kavouss.arasteh at gmail.com>
> > Dear Kurt
> > Dear All
> > Thanks to those who have generously volunteered to look st Section 4 ,
> in particular, certain sub paragraph of that section as well as
> corresponding parts of Appendix C
> > Having said that I wish to emphasise that it is nit expected to receive
> new draft from scratch ( total redrafting ) but merely suggesting necessary
> amendments to the existing text to maintain the relative consistency with
> the initial documents
> > In addition, the distinguished drafter need to take into account
> comments already received in TIRAGE from. Various stakeholder groups and
> ACs as well as those expressed during the discussion( transcriptions,
> recordings and chats
> > Moreover, it is absolutely necessary to avoid overlapping, repetitions
> and double application as may contained in other sub paragraphs drafted by
> > Some sort of coordination thus nay be required.
> > These suggested drafts should possibly made available 48 hours before
> the Thursday ( 11th ) meeting which needs to be seen by Kurt before .
> > Agenda of the next meeting should be limited to certain specific issue
> and not discussing various points at the same time.
> > Attention of respectful drafters are drawn to the fact that several
> adjectives or terms used which are required to be clearly defined to
> facilitate the implementation of the suggested / modified sub paragraphs
> > This was raised st various instances and raised by some sub teams
> > Best regards
> > Kavouss
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