[Gnso-epdp-team] For your review - updated language natural vs. legal

[Alex Deacon]

Hi,

Here is a redline from the IPC and BC on the legal/natural persons
language.

Happy Friday!

Alex


On Thu, Nov 8, 2018 at 1:46 PM Marika Konings <marika.konings at icann.org>
wrote:

> Dear All,
>
>
>
> Per action item #2 from today’s meeting (Support Staff will rework
> language for natural vs. legal persons and send to the mailing list so that
> EPDP Team members can include and/or correct their own viewpoints. Please
> propose edits by tomorrow, *Friday, 9 November*.), please find attached
> the updated language. On pages 1-3 you can find the clean version, on pages
> 4-6 the redline, for those interested. For those that expressed an interest
> to add their view points to this language, please share your proposed
> additions by Friday 9 November COB. These additions are expected to be
> added to the yellow highlighted part of the text.
>
>
>
> Best regards,
>
>
>
> Caitlin, Berry and Marika
>
>
>
> *Marika Konings*
>
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