[Gnso-epdp-team] For your review - updated language natural vs. legal

[Ayden Férdeline]

Thank you for this, Marika.

May I request that we insert an additional paragraph to note the NCSG's concerns in regards to h5. Suggested language is below (and attached with tracked changes):

In answer to question h5, the NCSG highlighted how the information of legal persons might also be the personal information of a natural person, or could lead to the identifiability of a natural person. In support of this claim, the NCSG brought attention to Opinion 4/2007 of the Article 29 Data Protection Working Party, which advised that where information about a legal person or business is “considered as "relating" to a natural person, it should be viewed as personal data, and the data protection rules should apply.”[1] The NCSG also noted that laws and regulations other than the GDPR guarantee the rights of individuals associated with entities, such as national constitutions and the Charter of Fundamental Rights of the European Union, which entitle both individuals and legal entities (such as religious groups) to protection.

[1] https://ec.europa.eu/justice/article-29/documentation/opinion-recommendation/files/2007/wp136_en.pdf

Kind regards,
Ayden Férdeline

‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐
On Thursday, 8 November 2018 22:46, Marika Konings <marika.konings at icann.org> wrote:

> Dear All,
>
> Per action item #2 from today’s meeting (Support Staff will rework language for natural vs. legal persons and send to the mailing list so that EPDP Team members can include and/or correct their own viewpoints. Please propose edits by tomorrow, Friday, 9 November.), please find attached the updated language. On pages 1-3 you can find the clean version, on pages 4-6 the redline, for those interested. For those that expressed an interest to add their view points to this language, please share your proposed additions by Friday 9 November COB. These additions are expected to be added to the yellow highlighted part of the text.
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> Best regards,
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> Caitlin, Berry and Marika
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> Marika Konings
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