[Gnso-epdp-team] For your review - updated language natural vs. legal

[Hadia Abdelsalam Mokhtar EL miniawi]

Dear Marika,


Please find the file attached with only one comment added.


Regards

Hadia


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From: Gnso-epdp-team <gnso-epdp-team-bounces at icann.org> on behalf of Marika Konings <marika.konings at icann.org>
Sent: 08 November 2018 23:46
To: GNSO EPDP
Subject: [Gnso-epdp-team] For your review - updated language natural vs. legal

Dear All,

Per action item #2 from today's meeting (Support Staff will rework language for natural vs. legal persons and send to the mailing list so that EPDP Team members can include and/or correct their own viewpoints. Please propose edits by tomorrow, Friday, 9 November.), please find attached the updated language. On pages 1-3 you can find the clean version, on pages 4-6 the redline, for those interested. For those that expressed an interest to add their view points to this language, please share your proposed additions by Friday 9 November COB. These additions are expected to be added to the yellow highlighted part of the text.

Best regards,

Caitlin, Berry and Marika

Marika Konings
Vice President, Policy Development Support - GNSO, Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN)
Email: marika.konings at icann.org<mailto:marika.konings at icann.org>

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