[Gnso-epdp-team] For your review - latest version of draft Initial Report, deadline 7 January 2020

[Volker Greimann]

Thank you Marika,

while I did not allocate any time to this over the holidays, I am keen 
to see what has changed. I do object to the deadline tomorrow though, 
precisely because the holiday season we have just completed prevented 
any meaningful work from being done and our day-jobs also necessitate 
some catching up in the next few days. A deadline of next week would be 
more appropriate.

Best,

Volker


Am 20.12.2019 um 21:01 schrieb Marika Konings:
>
> Ho, ho, ho, EPDP Team,
>
> As promised, your early Christmas present has arrived! The latest 
> version of the draft Initial Report has been posted for your review 
> (see https://community.icann.org/x/BQZxBw). In this clean version, 
> staff has incorporated the latest language of the building blocks that 
> has been reviewed over the last couple of weeks and made a number of 
> minor updates to address input already received. Remaining comments 
> and text highlighted in yellow concern items that will need to be 
> further reviewed and discussed by the EPDP Team in upcoming meetings.
>
> For those interested, we have also posted a redline version (pdf 
> document) so you can see all the edits made as well as comments 
> resolved. If there are any comments or edits that have been applied / 
> resolved but which in your group’s opinion should be further 
> considered, please mark these as such in the new google doc.
>
> As a reminder:
>
>   * Please do not reopen previously closed discussions unless there is
>     new information to consider.
>   * If you have concerns about certain section, please provide
>     alternative language to address your concern but also factor in
>     other perspectives expressed to date.
>   * Please do not redline but provide language suggestions in the form
>     of comments so that these can be reviewed by all before being applied.
>   * Minor edits (grammar, style) can be sent to the staff support team
>     directly.
>
> Your group’s input is due at the latest *by 7 January 2020*.
>
> Happy reading and happy holidays!!
>
> Caitlin, Berry and Marika
>
>
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