[Gnso-igo-ingo-crp] FOR FINAL REVIEW: Updated draft Initial Report

Tue Jan 10 02:06:50 UTC 2017

Mary,

Hold the press - Most important error on page 44 item 24 - Can not be
published like this !!! :-)

Other than that issue it looks very good, a lot of work has been put into
its preparation and it shows.

Best regards,

Paul Tattersfield

On Mon, Jan 9, 2017 at 7:44 PM, Phil Corwin <psc at vlaw-dc.com> wrote:

> I am fine with both of Petter’s suggestions.
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> Also, maybe I missed it, but I couldn’t find anywhere in the draft where
> it was noted that Petter and I were selected as co-chairs. That should be
> in there, so we can bask in the full glory of our achievement – or suffer
> permanent damage to our reputations ;-)
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> *From:* gnso-igo-ingo-crp-bounces at icann.org [mailto:gnso-igo-ingo-crp-
> bounces at icann.org] *On Behalf Of *Petter Rindforth
> *Sent:* Monday, January 09, 2017 2:35 PM
> *To:* Mary Wong
> *Cc:* gnso-igo-ingo-crp at icann.org
> *Subject:* Re: [Gnso-igo-ingo-crp] FOR FINAL REVIEW: Updated draft
> Initial Report
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> Dear Mary and WG Members,
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> Initially, I want to thank you all for some fantastic years and excellent
> work on this topic!
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> Let's hope that all other groups of interest in this topic appreciate the
> work, proposals and conclusions...
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> I have only two minor suggestions - referring here to the clean PDF
> version:
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> *Page 28f of the clean PDF version*
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> "As this initial consultation did not provide the WG with sufficient
> information and guidance to reach substantive conclusions, the WG requested
> that ICANN assist it by engaging an external legal expert to provide it
> with a more detailed analysis".
>
> May I propose a more positive formulation, to not be readed as a complaint
> against Mr Hans Corell:
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> *"Although this initial consultation provided the WG with some basic
> information, the WG concluded that there was still outstanding questions, a
> need for further information and guidance to reach substantive conclusions,
> and the WG therefore requested that ICANN assist it by engaging an external
> legal expert to provide it with a more detailed analysis."*
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> *Page 34:*
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> "The WG reviewed and discussed the IGO Small Group Proposal at its
> meetings on 13 October and 20 October"
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> I recommend to add the year (2016):
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> *"The WG reviewed and discussed the IGO Small Group Proposal at its
> meetings on 13 October 2016 and 20 October 2016".*
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> All the best,
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> Petter
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> 6 januari 2017 17:58:38 +01:00, skrev Mary Wong <mary.wong at icann.org>:
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> Dear Working Group members,
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> Thank you for your eagle eyes and helpful comments on the last draft of
> our Initial Report, last circulated in December 2016. Staff has now updated
> the draft with all the suggestions and comments received. The updated draft
> Initial Report is available for download and review on our WG wiki space,
> in both clean and redlined Word and PDF versions (as you prefer):
> https://community.icann.org/x/ZwG4Aw.
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> Please note that there are likely to be some remaining formatting and
> typographical errors that staff has not yet caught in this version; we will
> of course be sure to review the final document carefully prior to
> publishing for public comment. Please note also that we have added in the
> latest WG Charter (as amended by the GNSO Council in April 2015) and new
> Annexes (per Phil’s suggestion) that show the full text of the IGO Small
> Group Proposal and compilation of GAC advice on the topic since 2012. We
> have also restored the footnote numbering in Professor Swaine’s memo and
> added in a list of WG members.
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> As agreed on our last call, please let us know if you spot any significant
> errors or omissions by next *Friday 13 January 2017*. Following that
> date, staff will do one last pass through the document and prepare it for
> publication for public comment, early the following week (week beginning 16
> January 2017). With a 40-day comment period, this means that the public
> comment forum will close at the end of February, in time for ICANN58.
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> Thanks and cheers
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> Mary
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