[Gnso-igo-ingo-crp] FOR FINAL REVIEW: Updated draft Initial Report

Tue Jan 10 17:57:04 UTC 2017

Mary,
A reference change, section 6.1.1 - I am listed as an individual, it should
show as BC.  I requested this some time ago, but might not have been logged
in the database.
Thank you!

Sincerely,
Jay Chapman

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On Mon, Jan 9, 2017 at 8:06 PM, Paul Tattersfield <gpmgroup at gmail.com>
wrote:

> Mary,
>
> Hold the press - Most important error on page 44 item 24 - Can not be
> published like this !!! :-)
>
> Other than that issue it looks very good, a lot of work has been put into
> its preparation and it shows.
>
> Best regards,
>
>
> Paul Tattersfield
>
>
> On Mon, Jan 9, 2017 at 7:44 PM, Phil Corwin <psc at vlaw-dc.com> wrote:
>
>> I am fine with both of Petter’s suggestions.
>>
>>
>>
>> Also, maybe I missed it, but I couldn’t find anywhere in the draft where
>> it was noted that Petter and I were selected as co-chairs. That should be
>> in there, so we can bask in the full glory of our achievement – or suffer
>> permanent damage to our reputations ;-)
>>
>>
>>
>> Best regards
>>
>>
>>
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>>
>> *"Luck is the residue of design" -- Branch Rickey*
>>
>>
>>
>> *From:* gnso-igo-ingo-crp-bounces at icann.org [mailto:
>> gnso-igo-ingo-crp-bounces at icann.org] *On Behalf Of *Petter Rindforth
>> *Sent:* Monday, January 09, 2017 2:35 PM
>> *To:* Mary Wong
>> *Cc:* gnso-igo-ingo-crp at icann.org
>> *Subject:* Re: [Gnso-igo-ingo-crp] FOR FINAL REVIEW: Updated draft
>> Initial Report
>>
>>
>>
>> Dear Mary and WG Members,
>>
>>
>>
>> Initially, I want to thank you all for some fantastic years and excellent
>> work on this topic!
>>
>>
>>
>> Let's hope that all other groups of interest in this topic appreciate the
>> work, proposals and conclusions...
>>
>>
>>
>> I have only two minor suggestions - referring here to the clean PDF
>> version:
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> *Page 28f of the clean PDF version*
>>
>> "As this initial consultation did not provide the WG with sufficient
>> information and guidance to reach substantive conclusions, the WG requested
>> that ICANN assist it by engaging an external legal expert to provide it
>> with a more detailed analysis".
>>
>> May I propose a more positive formulation, to not be readed as a
>> complaint against Mr Hans Corell:
>>
>> *"Although this initial consultation provided the WG with some basic
>> information, the WG concluded that there was still outstanding questions, a
>> need for further information and guidance to reach substantive conclusions,
>> and the WG therefore requested that ICANN assist it by engaging an external
>> legal expert to provide it with a more detailed analysis."*
>>
>>
>>
>> *Page 34:*
>>
>> "The WG reviewed and discussed the IGO Small Group Proposal at its
>> meetings on 13 October and 20 October"
>>
>> I recommend to add the year (2016):
>>
>> *"The WG reviewed and discussed the IGO Small Group Proposal at its
>> meetings on 13 October 2016 and 20 October 2016".*
>>
>>
>>
>> All the best,
>>
>> Petter
>>
>>
>>
>> --
>>
>> Petter Rindforth, LL M
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>> 6 januari 2017 17:58:38 +01:00, skrev Mary Wong <mary.wong at icann.org>:
>>
>> Dear Working Group members,
>>
>>
>>
>> Thank you for your eagle eyes and helpful comments on the last draft of
>> our Initial Report, last circulated in December 2016. Staff has now updated
>> the draft with all the suggestions and comments received. The updated draft
>> Initial Report is available for download and review on our WG wiki space,
>> in both clean and redlined Word and PDF versions (as you prefer):
>> https://community.icann.org/x/ZwG4Aw.
>>
>>
>>
>> Please note that there are likely to be some remaining formatting and
>> typographical errors that staff has not yet caught in this version; we will
>> of course be sure to review the final document carefully prior to
>> publishing for public comment. Please note also that we have added in the
>> latest WG Charter (as amended by the GNSO Council in April 2015) and new
>> Annexes (per Phil’s suggestion) that show the full text of the IGO Small
>> Group Proposal and compilation of GAC advice on the topic since 2012. We
>> have also restored the footnote numbering in Professor Swaine’s memo and
>> added in a list of WG members.
>>
>>
>>
>> As agreed on our last call, please let us know if you spot any
>> significant errors or omissions by next *Friday 13 January 2017*.
>> Following that date, staff will do one last pass through the document and
>> prepare it for publication for public comment, early the following week
>> (week beginning 16 January 2017). With a 40-day comment period, this means
>> that the public comment forum will close at the end of February, in time
>> for ICANN58.
>>
>>
>>
>> Thanks and cheers
>>
>> Mary
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> Mary Wong
>>
>> Senior Policy Director
>>
>> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN)
>>
>> Email: mary.wong at icann.org
>>
>> Telephone: +1-603-5744889 <(603)%20574-4889>
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