[gnso-irtpd] Updated Draft

[Lars Hoffmann]

Dear all,

Please find attached the latest draft of the Final Report.

Please note that 4.2.2.4 on p. 21 reflects what I captured from the
conversation. I think Barbara (was) volunteered to take another look at this
section.

Other substantive changes:

P.17/18 ­ added Œdomain name under dispute¹ to Recommendation #1 (4.2.1.2
Recommendations)

P.18 ­ updated Œexpected impact¹ (4.2.1.4)

P. 21 ­ updated Œexcepted impact (4.2.2.4) (see above)
P. 24/25 - re­ordered the recommendations (4.2.3.2)

P.25/26 ­ amended the Œexpected impact¹ (4.2.3.4)

P.27. - amended Recommendation #13 to include that the one-stop webpage on
transfer dispute options is accessible from the registrant rights and
responsibility page (4.2.4.2)

p.28 ­ amended the expected impact (4.2.4.4) to include the change in
recommendation #13 (see above)

P.29 ­ amended the Recommendation #16 (4.2.5.2)

P.30 ­ amended expected impact to reflect changes in Recommendation #16
(4.2.5.4) 

P.30-32 ­ proposed amendments by Arthur to the Observations (4.2.6.1)

P.33-34 ­ proposed amendements by Arthur to Recommendation #18 (4.2.7.2)


Many thanks and best wishes,
Lars



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