[gnso-irtpd] Updated Report

[James M. Bladel]

Thank you, Lars.

Team:  Given that we have next Monday off, please use the time between now and our next call (8 September) to review the following items:


  1.  List of GDD comments provided by Lars (below)
  2.  Text of Recommendations
  3.  Overall proof-reading and readability.

Please submit your comments/edits to the list no later than Saturday 6 September!  Otherwise they will need to be raised during our call.

Thanks-

J.


From: Lars Hoffmann <lars.hoffmann at icann.org<mailto:lars.hoffmann at icann.org>>
Date: Friday, August 29, 2014 at 9:36
To: "gnso-irtpd at icann.org<mailto:gnso-irtpd at icann.org>" <gnso-irtpd at icann.org<mailto:gnso-irtpd at icann.org>>
Subject: [gnso-irtpd] Updated Report

Dear all,

Apologies for the late distribution of this update but thanks to the slight delay I was able to include comments from ICANN's GDD Team that might be useful to the Group's discussion.

It would be great if you found some time to go through the Report - especially the recommendations and observations in Section 4 and also consider the newly supplied comments from the GDD Team.

Main edits from the last version are related to Charter Question F and the additional recommendations 18 and 19. These can be found on pages 26, 27, 28, 29 and 30 - including the new Recommendation #19.

Please also note the comments from ICANN's GDD Team on:

  *   page 14
  *   Page 16
  *   Page 18
  *   Page 22
  *   Page 24 (two comments)
  *   Page 26
  *   Page 28 (two comments)
  *   Page 30
  *   Page 42

Finally, please note that for ease of reading I have started the latest changes from a clean copy, meaning that only the edits from the last version are red-lined.

Many thanks and have a good weekend and those lucky enough to have Monday off - have a great Labour Day, too!

Best,
Lars

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