[gnso-irtpd] Updated Report

[Lars Hoffmann]

Dear all,

I  hope this email finds you well. I waited with the sending out of the
agenda until today as it is the deadline that James marked in his email last
week (see below). So far I have received no edits. In light of that, please
find below the suggested agenda for Monday¹s call.
Best wishes,
Lars


IRTP Part D PDP Working Group Meeting ­ 9 September 2014 15.00 UTC

1. Roll Call/SOI Update
2. Review of Final Report ­ especially GDD comments
3. Review next steps and confirming next meeting
 



From:  James Bladel <jbladel at godaddy.com>
Date:  Friday, 29 August 2014 17:15
To:  Lars HOFFMANN <lars.hoffmann at icann.org>, "gnso-irtpd at icann.org"
<gnso-irtpd at icann.org>
Subject:  Re: [gnso-irtpd] Updated Report

Thank you, Lars.

Team:  Given that we have next Monday off, please use the time between now
and our next call (8 September) to review the following items:

1. List of GDD comments provided by Lars (below)
2. Text of Recommendations
3. Overall proof-reading and readability.
Please submit your comments/edits to the list no later than Saturday 6
September!  Otherwise they will need to be raised during our call.

Thanks‹

J.


From: Lars Hoffmann <lars.hoffmann at icann.org>
Date: Friday, August 29, 2014 at 9:36
To: "gnso-irtpd at icann.org" <gnso-irtpd at icann.org>
Subject: [gnso-irtpd] Updated Report

Dear all,

Apologies for the late distribution of this update but thanks to the slight
delay I was able to include comments from ICANN's GDD Team that might be
useful to the Group¹s discussion.

It would be great if you found some time to go through the Report ­
especially the recommendations and observations in Section 4 and also
consider the newly supplied comments from the GDD Team.

Main edits from the last version are related to Charter Question F and the
additional recommendations 18 and 19. These can be found on pages 26, 27,
28, 29 and 30 ­ including the new Recommendation #19.

Please also note the comments from ICANN¹s GDD Team on:
* page 14
* Page 16
* Page 18
* Page 22
* Page 24 (two comments)
* Page 26
* Page 28 (two comments)
* Page 30
* Page 42
Finally, please note that for ease of reading I have started the latest
changes from a clean copy, meaning that only the edits from the last version
are red-lined. 

Many thanks and have a good weekend and those lucky enough to have Monday
off ­ have a great Labour Day, too!

Best,
Lars



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