[gnso-irtpd] Updated Report

[Alan Greenberg]

One more small wording change.

14 starts off with: The WG recommends that, as an 
additional best practice, ICANN accredited Registrars...

That should have been: The WG recommends that, in 
addition, as a best practice, ICANN accredited Registrars
(See page 29 of the trascript - 
http://gnso.icann.org/en/meetings/transcript-irtp-d-18aug14-en.pdf 
ot at about minute 50 of the MP3).

Alan

At 07/09/2014 10:12 PM, Alan Greenberg wrote:
>Sorry for the late comment.
>
>Rec 13 now reads:
>
>#13 The WG recommends that ICANN create and 
>maintain a user-friendly, one-stop website 
>containing all relevant information concerning 
>disputed transfers and potential remedies to 
>registrants. Such a website should be clearly 
>accessible from the ICANN Registrants' Benefits 
>and Responsibilities page ( 
>https://www.icann.org/resources/pages/benefits-2013-09-16-en).
>
>I would suggest that "should be clearly 
>accessible from" be changed to "should be 
>clearly accessible from or integrated into"
>
>That gives those implementing the recommendation 
>free reign to do this in the most logical and "user-friendly" manner.
>
>I will be on at the start of the call, but will 
>need to leave within a few minutes, so if there 
>are any questions about this, I would hope that 
>they can be addressed at the start of the meeting.
>
>Thanks, Alan
>
>At 29/08/2014 10:36 AM, Lars Hoffmann wrote:
>>Dear all,
>>
>>Apologies for the late distribution of this 
>>update but thanks to the slight delay I was 
>>able to include comments from ICANN's GDD Team 
>>that might be useful to the Group’s discussion.
>>
>>It would be great if you found some time to go 
>>through the Report – especially the 
>>recommendations and observations in Section 4 
>>and also consider the newly supplied comments from the GDD Team.
>>
>>Main edits from the last version are related to 
>>Charter Question F and the additional 
>>recommendations 18 and 19. These can be found 
>>on pages 26, 27, 28, 29 and 30 – including the new Recommendation #19.
>>
>>Please also note the comments from ICANN’s GDD Team on:
>>    * page 14
>>    * Page 16
>>    * Page 18
>>    * Page 22
>>    * Page 24 (two comments)
>>    * Page 26
>>    * Page 28 (two comments)
>>    * Page 30
>>    * Page 42
>>Finally, please note that for ease of reading I 
>>have started the latest changes from a clean 
>>copy, meaning that only the edits from the last version are red-lined.
>>
>>Many thanks and have a good weekend and those 
>>lucky enough to have Monday off – have a great Labour Day, too!
>>
>>Best,
>>Lars
>>
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