[Gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg] Markup ("redline") of WG Final Report

[Mary Wong]

Hello everyone,

Please find attached the marked-up version of our Final Report, showing the changes that were made to the last version circulated on 20 November. As noted previously, the changes are those that were distributed by email on 1 December as reflecting the new language of certain WG recommendations in the Executive Summary of the Final Report (and with corresponding language changes made to Section 7 where these recommendations are repeated verbatim).

We are continuing to proof-read and format the final clean document, so there may still be a few minor typos and formatting/spacing issues in the attached. However, the co-chairs thought it would be useful for everyone to get to see all the changes that have been made to the Final Report in a single document prior to the deadline later today.

Thanks and cheers
Mary



Mary Wong
Senior Policy Director
Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN)
Email: mary.wong at icann.org
Telephone: +1-603-5744889

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