[gnso-rds-pdp-wg] Draft early outreach message for WG review

[Greg Shatan]

I found a few typos in the draft circulated.  (For future review exercises,
I'd recommend a Word document or a Google Doc so that a mark-up can be
created, rather than a PDF that is apparently locked).  No issues with the
substance.

First two bullet points on page 1:  Delete space in "next- generation"
Question 3 on page 3: "address" should be "addressed"
Last paragraph of document: There are some tracked changes that need to be
"accepted."

Greg

On Sun, May 8, 2016 at 9:24 PM, Gomes, Chuck <cgomes at verisign.com> wrote:

> All,
>
> Let's extend the deadline for comments on the outreach message to tomorrow
> COB, i.e., Monday COB wherever you are.
>
> Chuck
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces at icann.org [mailto:
> gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces at icann.org] On Behalf Of Kathy Kleiman
> Sent: Sunday, May 08, 2016 10:54 AM
> To: gnso-rds-pdp-wg at icann.org
> Subject: Re: [gnso-rds-pdp-wg] Draft early outreach message for WG review
>
> Hi Chuck, Lisa and All,
> Tx you for the reminders. I am assuming you will be receiving some input
> today and tomorrow. For those of us with children and families, these are
> busy weekends of spring activities and end of year events. Happy Mother's
> Day to all celebrating!!
>
> Best,
> Kathy
>
> On 5/8/2016 10:17 AM, Gomes, Chuck wrote:
> > If no feedback is received by our deadline today, we will assume that it
> is okay to send the message out as drafted.
> >
> > Chuck
> >
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces at icann.org
> > [mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces at icann.org] On Behalf Of Lisa Phifer
> > Sent: Saturday, May 07, 2016 12:57 PM
> > To: RDS PDP WG
> > Subject: Re: [gnso-rds-pdp-wg] Draft early outreach message for WG
> > review
> >
> > Dear all,
> >
> > A reminder that PDP WG feedback if any on the attached early outreach
> message is due no later than tomorrow - Sunday 8 May 23.59 UTC.
> >
> > Best, Lisa
> >
> > At 12:07 PM 5/3/2016, Lisa Phifer wrote:
> >> Dear all,
> >>
> >> As agreed during today's WG call, attached please find a slightly
> >> revised draft input template to solicit early input from ICANN
> >> SOs/ACs and GNSO SG/Cs. This is the template discussed in today's WG
> call.
> >>
> >> Remember, there will be many opportunities for community input
> >> throughout this PDP. The attached input template is to be used to
> >> initiate the early outreach required of every PDP to inform the WG at
> >> the start of its work. The template is a tool used successfully by
> >> other PDP WG's to solicit structured input, along with any additional
> >> input each group wishes to provide.
> >>
> >> WG member feedback on this draft input template is welcome: please
> >> send any feedback to the entire WG list <gnso-rds-pdp-wg at icann.org>
> >> no later than Sunday 8 May 23.59 UTC.
> >>
> >> Our goal is to send the final version of this template to initiate
> >> early outreach next week.
> >>
> >> Best, Lisa
> >>
> >>
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