[ispcp] NEW VERSION - ISPCP Draft Comments on US Government ICANN MoU Inquiry

[Greg Ruth]

Well, I kinda liked the text on NRO, but I'll go along with the
majority.

Greg

--- Mark McFadden <mcfadden at 21st-century-texts.com> wrote:

> All:
> 
> Here is version 1.3 of the ISPCP Response to the Department of 
> Commerce's Request for Comments on the ICANN MoU. Once again, I have 
> attached it in Microsoft Word and PDF formats.
> 
> Here are the substantial changes in the document:
> 
> - I have incorporated Greg's suggested text about formalizing the 
> administration of the root servers in section 2.5 (page 4);
> - I have changed the words "tragic attempt" to misguided attempt" in
> the 
> discussion of weighted voting in section 2.4;
> - I have tried to clarify the goal of improving existing
> relationships 
> with other related Internet organizations in some text in section
> 2.7;
> - After Tony's comment, I have removed the text related to the NRO in
> 
> section 2.2 and 2.4;
> 
> I'd be very happy to have further comments from the Constituency for
> a 
> final draft. I'd like to send our comments to Commerce in the next 48
> 
> hours so please "Reply All" with comments as soon as you are able.
> 
> mark
> 
> Mark McFadden
> Secretariat
> ISPCP Constituency
> 


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