[ispcp] NEW VERSION - ISPCP Draft Comments on US Government ICANN MoU Inquiry

[Mark McFadden]

Perhaps the text on the NRO was a tragic failure?

mark

Greg Ruth wrote:
> Well, I kinda liked the text on NRO, but I'll go along with the
> majority.
> 
> Greg
> 
> --- Mark McFadden <mcfadden at 21st-century-texts.com> wrote:
> 
>> All:
>>
>> Here is version 1.3 of the ISPCP Response to the Department of 
>> Commerce's Request for Comments on the ICANN MoU. Once again, I have 
>> attached it in Microsoft Word and PDF formats.
>>
>> Here are the substantial changes in the document:
>>
>> - I have incorporated Greg's suggested text about formalizing the 
>> administration of the root servers in section 2.5 (page 4);
>> - I have changed the words "tragic attempt" to misguided attempt" in
>> the 
>> discussion of weighted voting in section 2.4;
>> - I have tried to clarify the goal of improving existing
>> relationships 
>> with other related Internet organizations in some text in section
>> 2.7;
>> - After Tony's comment, I have removed the text related to the NRO in
>>
>> section 2.2 and 2.4;
>>
>> I'd be very happy to have further comments from the Constituency for
>> a 
>> final draft. I'd like to send our comments to Commerce in the next 48
>>
>> hours so please "Reply All" with comments as soon as you are able.
>>
>> mark
>>
>> Mark McFadden
>> Secretariat
>> ISPCP Constituency
>>
> 
> 
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