[Neobrahmigp] [Ext] Re: Gurmukhi-LGR-20180430 - IP Feedback

Thu May 24 07:38:24 UTC 2018

Dear Prof. Lehal,

Thank you for reviewing and updating the proposal.  

Please find attached the corresponding changes in the XML/HTML file.  We have also run the XML on the test labels and sharing the annotated file.  

Kindly review and share any feedback.

Regards,
Sarmad

From: Dr. G. S. Lehal (ਗੁਰਪ੍ਰੀਤ ਸਿੰਘ ਲਹਿਲ) [mailto:gslehal at gmail.com] 
Sent: Wednesday, May 23, 2018 10:37 PM
To: Pitinan Kooarmornpatana <pitinan.koo at icann.org>
Cc: neo brahmi <neobrahmigp at icann.org>; Sarmad Hussain <sarmad.hussain at icann.org>
Subject: [Ext] Re: [Neobrahmigp] Gurmukhi-LGR-20180430 - IP Feedback

Hello,

Please find attached the following:

1. Gurmukhi-LGR-20180522_PK2.doc

2. Response of IP to-Gurmukhi-LGR-20180430_IP (1)

3. Gurmukhi Test Labels 20180523.txt

I have incorporated the suggestions mentioned by IP as well as by Pitinan in her last email.

Thanks.

On Mon, May 21, 2018 at 6:45 PM, Pitinan Kooarmornpatana <pitinan.koo at icann.org <mailto:pitinan.koo at icann.org> > wrote:

Dear Dr. Lehal, 

As discussed, kindly find the draft of the updated Gurmukhi Proposal for your finalization. 

Edit notes for Gurmukhi-LGR-20180521_PK.docx

  1. Add Devanagari Nukta and Gurmukhi Nukta as cross-script variant

  2. Edit WLE Rule#7 as suggested by the IP 

  3. Add two paragraph regards to ZWNJ/ZWJ in section 3.3.8 and 4.1.1.ii which the sample in Gurmukhi is still need to be added

  4. In corporate other IP edit suggestions in the file

Edit notes for Gurmukhi_test_label_20180521.txt 
  1. Combine all 4 test files (valid/invalid/cross-script/excluded codepoint) into one file with 4 sections 

Edit notes for Response of IP to-Gurmukhi-LGR-20180430_IP_PK.docx

  1. I add responses to the last column. Kindy review. 

Please review and let us know any feedback. Once the .doc version is finalized, we will update the XML accordingly.

Regards,

Pitinan

From: Neobrahmigp <neobrahmigp-bounces at icann.org <mailto:neobrahmigp-bounces at icann.org> > on behalf of Sarmad Hussain <sarmad.hussain at icann.org <mailto:sarmad.hussain at icann.org> >
Date: Thursday, May 17, 2018 at 10:19
To: "Dr. G. S. Lehal (ਗੁਰਪ੍ਰੀਤ ਸਿੰਘ ਲਹਿਲ)" <gslehal at gmail.com <mailto:gslehal at gmail.com> >
Cc: neo brahmi <neobrahmigp at icann.org <mailto:neobrahmigp at icann.org> >
Subject: [Neobrahmigp] Gurmukhi-LGR-20180430 - IP Feedback

Dear Dr. Lehal,

Thank you for sharing the updated version of the Gurmukhi LGR proposal.  The IP has reviewed the Proposal, XML and Test labels.  The proposal is now in final stage.  IP has suggested some edits in the proposal document, and provided some feedback in a separate document.  For example, they note that use of 0A3C with at least one code point can form variant sequence with a Devanagari sequence, when the latter uses 093C - this sequence needs to be tabulated in the variant list.

Here is the IP response to Gurmukhi with associated files. Attached  are the following 3 files: 

1.	IP response document
2.	Fully change tracked DOCX containing detailed editing suggestions 
3.	XML file with corrections and suggested edits applied (no change tracking, must use diff)

Please let us know if you have any queries.  

Regards,
Sarmad

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Professor, Department of Computer Science

Dean, Faculty of Computing Sciences

Director,  Research Centre for Punjabi Language Technology,
Punjabi University, Patiala.
India-147002

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