[RPM-IRT] [Ext] Re: ENC: Items to Review for Meeting #7 | 22 February 2024

[Antonietta Mangiacotti]

Hi Kathy – the text you noted below comes from the version of the docs that were published for public comment to indicate to readers that comments were added by staff containing the recommendation text next to the relevant proposed revision in the docs. Also, I have reviewed your permissions and it appears you are able to add comments and/or edit the RPM docs as needed.

Please let us know if you are still having issues.

Thanks!

Best,
Antonietta

From: Kathy Kleiman <kathy at kathykleiman.com>
Date: Tuesday, February 20, 2024 at 12:57 PM
To: "rpm-irt at icann.org" <rpm-irt at icann.org>, Antonietta Mangiacotti <antonietta.mangiacotti at icann.org>, Elisa Busetto <elisa.busetto at icann.org>
Subject: [Ext] Re: ENC: [RPM-IRT] Items to Review for Meeting #7 | 22 February 2024


To RPM IPT,

Quick question: the URS document states at the top "**Note: The relevant RPM PDP recommendations pertaining to the proposed changes in this document are referenced in the comment section"

but I do not see any comments and there is no place to comment on the highlighted text.  Could you open it up for more extensive review/comments?

Tx, Kathy
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Subject: [RPM-IRT] Items to Review for Meeting #7 | 22 February 2024

Dear All,

As indicated in the agenda [1], during RPM IRT meeting #7 on 22
February 2024, we will continue reviewing the proposed changes
concerning the URS materials. In addition, we will aim to review and
discuss for the first time with the IRT the educational materials to
assist users of the RPMs. As such, in advance of meeting #7, you are
requested to review the remaining documents below:

* URS Procedure - post Public Comment version [2]
* URS High Level Requirements - post Public Comment version [3]
* RPM Educational Materials [4]

As mentioned in our previous email, following meeting #6 [5] we have
made the following updates to the post public comment versions of the
RPM procedural documents:

* Highlighted (in yellow) the relevant sections of the RPM
procedural documents for IRT discussion
* Reviewed and added any missing public comments
* Created a post public comment version of the URS High Level
Requirements
* Added comments to relevant sections of the RPM documents
containing a summary of the IRT discussions from meeting #6

The post public comments versions for all RPM procedural documents is
available in this folder:
https://drive.google.com/drive/u/1/folders/1IcJVkUgIZlowuo4P0b41dgay35BVpGvp [drive.google.com]<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/drive.google.com/drive/u/1/folders/1IcJVkUgIZlowuo4P0b41dgay35BVpGvp__;!!PtGJab4!83T8604CMcv3kqnZCIQQp4Yc_n1yPcCnXcIxjNAOkLoLMa9MS67H6mHcQXgimjgpwx0wEJvyD9nz_mNNOrAhEAyupNHzo2P42vU$>

[6]

You are kindly requested to review the materials listed above by COB
Tuesday, 20 February. Should you have any questions, please do not
hesitate to reach out.

Best regards,

Antonietta, Karen, Elisa


Links:
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[1] https://community.icann.org/x/1YAFEg
[2] https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qY-NdwBTULoRaXoE6MQEOj_-61sBbpH_Y_tV6MCLhKw/edit [docs.google.com]<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/docs.google.com/document/d/1qY-NdwBTULoRaXoE6MQEOj_-61sBbpH_Y_tV6MCLhKw/edit__;!!PtGJab4!83T8604CMcv3kqnZCIQQp4Yc_n1yPcCnXcIxjNAOkLoLMa9MS67H6mHcQXgimjgpwx0wEJvyD9nz_mNNOrAhEAyupNHzrWHCmkI$>
[3] https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mDCOzxDCeGJSCK76a_lW7WMiiBAGUHAbXznYBtFu8eY/edit [docs.google.com]<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/docs.google.com/document/d/1mDCOzxDCeGJSCK76a_lW7WMiiBAGUHAbXznYBtFu8eY/edit__;!!PtGJab4!83T8604CMcv3kqnZCIQQp4Yc_n1yPcCnXcIxjNAOkLoLMa9MS67H6mHcQXgimjgpwx0wEJvyD9nz_mNNOrAhEAyupNHzNWy31Jo$>
[4] https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rcndtSMXxn8W-JslBELfbT3ByJ-MxW5yqZ89z-eRroU/edit [docs.google.com]<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/docs.google.com/document/d/1rcndtSMXxn8W-JslBELfbT3ByJ-MxW5yqZ89z-eRroU/edit__;!!PtGJab4!83T8604CMcv3kqnZCIQQp4Yc_n1yPcCnXcIxjNAOkLoLMa9MS67H6mHcQXgimjgpwx0wEJvyD9nz_mNNOrAhEAyupNHzlSuJ77k$>
[5] https://community.icann.org/x/A4PxDg
[6] https://drive.google.com/drive/u/1/folders/1IcJVkUgIZlowuo4P0b41dgay35BVpGvp [drive.google.com]<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/drive.google.com/drive/u/1/folders/1IcJVkUgIZlowuo4P0b41dgay35BVpGvp__;!!PtGJab4!83T8604CMcv3kqnZCIQQp4Yc_n1yPcCnXcIxjNAOkLoLMa9MS67H6mHcQXgimjgpwx0wEJvyD9nz_mNNOrAhEAyupNHzo2P42vU$>
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