[Rt4-whois] Comments on the Issues paper [SEC=UNCLASSIFIED]

[Nettlefold, Peter]

Hello all,

I have been following these discussions with interest (including the recording of the last teleconference). 

Almost every point I can think to make has already been made by others, so I'll avoid confusing the paper by commenting on comments etc.  

In short, I think some of Kathy's additions are very useful, and I think we should be able to usefully recast them to avoid some of the issues raised by Bill. I also agree with many of the points made by others, including James' point about potentially replacing the list in the introduction with a short uncontentious statement (to avoid the risk of trying to develop and agree on some sort of exhaustive list). 

I look forward to discussing this further with you all on Wednesday.

Kind regards,

Peter


-----Original Message-----
From: rt4-whois-bounces at icann.org [mailto:rt4-whois-bounces at icann.org] On Behalf Of Omar Kaminski
Sent: Monday, 16 May 2011 12:01 PM
To: rt4-whois
Subject: Re: [Rt4-whois] Comments on the Issues paper

Dear Team,

My considerations are attached, using the same docx as Bill then James.

Have a great week,

Omar



2011/5/15 James M. Bladel <jbladel at godaddy.com>
>
> Emily and Team:
>
> My comments are attached, appended to Bill's draft.  Most of these were composed somewhere over the N. Atlantic, so apologies if they don't make sense and/or need further explanation.
> Thanks--
> J.
>
> -------- Original Message --------
> Subject: [Rt4-whois] Comments on the Issues paper
> From: Emily Taylor <emily.taylor at etlaw.co.uk>
> Date: Sun, May 15, 2011 9:13 am
> To: "rt4-whois at icann.org WHOIS" <rt4-whois at icann.org>
>
> Hi all
> A gentle reminder that we agreed to review the draft issues paper, and circulate comments by close of business on Monday. The Team has asked Alice to edit the comments, and we're hoping to set up a call on Wednesday with this as the only agenda item.
> So far, Kathy and Bill have circulated comments - thank you.
> Please let's have your comments by end of Monday.  If you're happy with the paper, or have views on the comments already made, please say so.
> Thanks
> Emily
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