[Rt4-whois] Draft letter to compliance - YOUR FEEDBACK PLEASE

[Emily Taylor]

Hi all

In Dakar, as a result of our communications with the Compliance team, we
agreed to lift a lot of the detail out of our report, and write them a
letter with our findings.

Here is my first draft.  I would be grateful for your honest feedback, and
particularly suggestions for shortening it.

Thanks

Emily



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