[Rt4-whois] Draft letter to compliance - YOUR FEEDBACK PLEASE

[Emily Taylor]

Seth, James

Many thanks for your feedback.  It would be helpful if you could suggest
some edits in the text to take it on to the next stage.

Kind regards

Emily

On 7 November 2011 17:59, Seth M Reiss <seth.reiss at lex-ip.com> wrote:

> I think I agree with most of James’ comments concerning what is not within
> Compliance’s purview but I am wondering if we cannot keep the content but
> soften it so that it does not sound like a directive to Compliance.  So, in
> other words, Compliance could study and respond to a GNSO’s studies not
> because it is obliged to but because it could help improve the quality of
> the work that it is tasked with.****
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> As far as shortening, if it’s going to take the form of a letter in the
> appendix, I am wondering if shortening is really that important.  ****
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> Seth ****
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> *From:* rt4-whois-bounces at icann.org [mailto:rt4-whois-bounces at icann.org] *On
> Behalf Of *James M. Bladel
> *Sent:* Thursday, November 03, 2011 7:00 AM
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> *Subject:* Re: [Rt4-whois] Draft letter to compliance - YOUR FEEDBACK
> PLEASE****
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> Emily and Team:
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> My comments / edits attached.****
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> Thanks--****
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> J.****
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> -------- Original Message --------
> Subject: [Rt4-whois] Draft letter to compliance - YOUR FEEDBACK PLEASE
> From: Emily Taylor <emily at emilytaylor.eu>
> Date: Thu, November 03, 2011 7:09 am
> To: rt4-whois at icann.org
>
> Hi all
>
> In Dakar, as a result of our communications with the Compliance team, we
> agreed to lift a lot of the detail out of our report, and write them a
> letter with our findings.
>
> Here is my first draft.  I would be grateful for your honest feedback, and
> particularly suggestions for shortening it.
>
> Thanks
>
> Emily
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