[Rt4-whois] Fwd: draft report

[Emily Taylor]

Hi all

I promised to circulate another draft. Here it is. My edits start from page 17 and go to the end of the section on compliance.  I am not quite happy with my new text on compliance and would welcome your input on that. 

I will continue to work through and send more edits. 

Alice -  as the report doc now crashes every time I edit it please would you create a clean version which will be easier to read. All - this doesn't mean the edits ARE accepted but will help us to get a measure of how the doc is evolving. 

All- please let me have your feedback on edits to date. Especially flag ones you care about. To move us forward I will assume you are happy unless I hear from you. So speak up!

Kind regards

Emily

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