[Rt4-whois] Recommendations - here attached [SEC=UNCLASSIFIED]

[Nettlefold, Peter]

Classification: UNCLASSIFIED

Thanks Kathy for circulating these versions - they're very helpful.

The first thing I noticed was that the recommendation for a consumer portal seems to be missing. I assume this wasn't intentional? 

The second relates to the privacy related recommendations, which I commented on earlier. On that issue, my comments and concerns remain.

I'll keep reading, but wanted to share my initial thoughts as soon as I could.

Cheers

Peter

----- Original Message -----
From: Kathy Kleiman [mailto:kathy at kathykleiman.com]
Sent: Wednesday, November 30, 2011 02:06 PM
To: rt4-whois at icann.org <rt4-whois at icann.org>
Subject: [Rt4-whois] Recommendations - here attached

Hi All,
To the Chapters 7 and 8 that Emily circulated today (an expansion of the 
Gap Analysis from one chapter into two to make it more readable), let me 
add Chapter 9, Recommendations.

Chapter 9 is also separated out from the Gap Analysis to create a 
separate place for our Recommendations. The entire report leads up to 
them, and I guess they are the climax of our story.

We worked hard to take our Dakar and MDR recommendations, remove 
duplicates, and clarify languages (so that all references are clear, 
etc.). There are still a few blanks to be filled in, so if you know the 
answers, please let the group know.

Two copies attached:  a "clean" one, and one with the full set of edits 
shown.

I'll be online for awhile, so please let me know if you can't read the 
files.
Best,
Kathy

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