[Rt4-whois] flip last two recommendations? [SEC=UNCLASSIFIED]

[Mikhail Jakushev]

Dear Peter,
It is :).
Kind regards,
Michael

From: rt4-whois-bounces at icann.org [mailto:rt4-whois-bounces at icann.org] On Behalf Of Nettlefold, Peter
Sent: Thursday, May 03, 2012 9:00 AM
To: Kathy Kleiman; rt4-whois at icann.org
Subject: Re: [Rt4-whois] flip last two recommendations? [SEC=UNCLASSIFIED]

Hello again all,

I support this change, as it would improve the flow and readability of our recommendations.

I would also support changing 'tables', as I had not understood that cultural nuance. Could we instead say 'publishes', to make it clear that we would expect the plan to be made public?

Cheers,

Peter


From: rt4-whois-bounces at icann.org [mailto:rt4-whois-bounces at icann.org] On Behalf Of Kathy Kleiman
Sent: Thursday, 3 May 2012 2:35 PM
To: rt4-whois at icann.org
Subject: [Rt4-whois] flip last two recommendations?

Hi All,
What a tour de force!  It's really coming together. Thanks for all the hard work of everyone on the call last night.

Quick question: can we flip the final two recommendations, and make a one word change -- the word tables?  I think it may mean something different in different cultures. In the US, if you "table" a motion, you put it aside and don't act on it. Since we certainly want people to act on it here, I would like to propose the words  "provides" or "lays out" instead.

Best, Kathy

CURRENT ==>
Recommendation 15:  Annual Status Reports
ICANN should provide at least annual written status reports on its progress towards implementing the recommendations of this WHOIS Review Team. The first of these reports should be published one year, at the latest, after ICANN tables the implementation plan mentioned in recommendation 16. Each of these reports should contain all relevant information, including all underlying facts, figures and analyses.

Recommendation 16:  Detailed and Comprehensive Plan
ICANN should provide a detailed and comprehensive plan within 3 months after the submission of the Final WHOIS Review Team report that outlines how ICANN will move forward in implementing these recommendations.


OFFERED ==>
Recommendation 15:  Detailed and Comprehensive Plan
ICANN should provide a detailed and comprehensive plan within 3 months after the submission of the Final WHOIS Review Team report that outlines how ICANN will move forward in implementing these recommendations.

Recommendation 16:  Annual Status Reports
ICANN should provide at least annual written status reports on its progress towards implementing the recommendations of this WHOIS Review Team. The first of these reports should be published one year, at the latest, after ICANN tables the implementation plan mentioned in recommendation 15, above. Each of these reports should contain all relevant information, including all underlying facts, figures and analyses.

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