[Rt4-whois] flip last two recommendations? [SEC=UNCLASSIFIED]

[Emily Taylor]

Yes, "publishes" is a better word.  Thanks


On 3 May 2012 06:00, Nettlefold, Peter <Peter.Nettlefold at dbcde.gov.au>wrote:

> Hello again all,****
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> I support this change, as it would improve the flow and readability of our
> recommendations.****
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> I would also support changing ‘tables’, as I had not understood that
> cultural nuance. Could we instead say ‘publishes’, to make it clear that we
> would expect the plan to be made public?****
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> Cheers,****
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> Peter****
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> *From:* rt4-whois-bounces at icann.org [mailto:rt4-whois-bounces at icann.org] *On
> Behalf Of *Kathy Kleiman
> *Sent:* Thursday, 3 May 2012 2:35 PM
> *To:* rt4-whois at icann.org
> *Subject:* [Rt4-whois] flip last two recommendations?****
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> Hi All,
> What a tour de force!  It's really coming together. Thanks for all the
> hard work of everyone on the call last night.
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> Quick question: can we flip the final two recommendations, and make a one
> word change -- the word tables?  I think it may mean something different in
> different cultures. In the US, if you "table" a motion, you put it aside
> and don't act on it. Since we certainly want people to act on it here, I
> would like to propose the words  "provides" or "lays out" instead.
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> Best, Kathy
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> CURRENT ==>
> Recommendation 15:  Annual Status Reports
> ICANN should provide at least annual written status reports on its
> progress towards implementing the recommendations of this WHOIS Review
> Team. The first of these reports should be published one year, at the
> latest, after ICANN tables the implementation plan mentioned in
> recommendation 16. Each of these reports should contain all relevant
> information, including all underlying facts, figures and analyses.
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> Recommendation 16:  Detailed and Comprehensive Plan
> ICANN should provide a detailed and comprehensive plan within 3 months
> after the submission of the Final WHOIS Review Team report that outlines
> how ICANN will move forward in implementing these recommendations.
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> OFFERED ==>
> Recommendation 15:  Detailed and Comprehensive Plan
> ICANN should provide a detailed and comprehensive plan within 3 months
> after the submission of the Final WHOIS Review Team report that outlines
> how ICANN will move forward in implementing these recommendations.
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> Recommendation 16:  Annual Status Reports
> ICANN should provide at least annual written status reports on its
> progress towards implementing the recommendations of this WHOIS Review
> Team. The first of these reports should be published one year, at the
> latest, after ICANN *tables *the implementation plan mentioned in *recommendation
> 15, above*. Each of these reports should contain all relevant
> information, including all underlying facts, figures and analyses.
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> ****
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