[Rt4-whois] Redline version

[Alice Jansen]

Dear Review Team Members,

This is to notify you that the redline version is now available at: http://www.icann.org/en/about/aoc-review/whois/final-report-redline-11may12-en.pdf

Links to this redline document have been added to the public comment box - http://www.icann.org/en/news/public-comment/whois-rt-final-report-11may12-en.htm and announcement - http://www.icann.org/en/news/announcements/announcement-11may12-en.htm

Thanks,

Kind regards

Alice
From: Seth M Reiss <seth.reiss at lex-ip.com<mailto:seth.reiss at lex-ip.com>>
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Subject: Re: [Rt4-whois] Request for redline version

Can’t Word and other programs just do this at a click of a computer key?

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Subject: Re: [Rt4-whois] Request for redline version


Thanks for the clarification Emily.



I still have a reluctance for ICANN staff to spend time on this but feel reassured in that both

documents have been published.

Lynn





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Subject: Re: [Rt4-whois] Request for redline version
Hi there

Just to be clear what I'm proposing, Lynn

I don't propose that we publish our working discussions, merely the differences between our two public documents.  This is similar to what was done by ICANN for the various versions of the gTLD applicant guidebook.  I found it very helpful because if you have read the whole document once, you can then concentrate on what has changed.

So, it's just highlighting differences in the two published texts.

Kind regards

Emily
On 17 May 2012 13:16, <lynn at goodsecurityconsulting.com<mailto:lynn at goodsecurityconsulting.com>> wrote:
If we have the discretion to decline this request, it seems like unnecessary work to me.
The principle that we have emphasized is that this is a consensus based output and we did work hard to achieve that.  and we have followed all the transparency practices as we progressed.
Lynn

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