[IAG-WHOIS conflicts] Draft preliminary report

[Stephanie Perrin]

My apologies for not getting my comments in by now. I have been 
preoccupied with the birth of my first grandchild, and while I am 
dedicated to ICANN this has not been top of mind.  Can you tell me what 
the deadline is for receiving a statement from me, which might be an 
appendix or a stakeholder view or a minority report.  Frankly my 
priority is to have it included, although I  do have sympathy for 
Chris's position re voting and minority views.
Kind regards, Stephanie Perrin

On 2015-09-17 14:37, Jamie Hedlund wrote:
> Thank you, Allen.
>
> In light of the extensive edits, please review and indicate whether 
> you have any concerns or objections. Thank you.
>
> Best,
> Jamie
>
> Jamie Hedlund
> VP, Strategic Programs
> Global Domains Division
> ICANN
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> From: Allen Grogan <allen.grogan at icann.org 
> <mailto:allen.grogan at icann.org>>
> Date: Thursday, September 17, 2015 at 14:31
> To: Jamie Hedlund <jamie.hedlund at icann.org 
> <mailto:jamie.hedlund at icann.org>>, Christopher Wilkinson 
> <cw at christopherwilkinson.eu <mailto:cw at christopherwilkinson.eu>>
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> Subject: Re: [IAG-WHOIS conflicts] Draft preliminary report
>
> Can't guarantee the accuracy, but I believe the attached redline 
> reflects the changes proposed by Christopher.  Note that some language 
> consisting of hyperlinks in the original document shows up here in 
> blue (meaning it looks like it is a change to the document even though 
> it isn't).
>
> Regards,
>
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> From: <whois-iag-volunteers-bounces at icann.org 
> <mailto:whois-iag-volunteers-bounces at icann.org>> on behalf of Jamie 
> Hedlund <jamie.hedlund at icann.org <mailto:jamie.hedlund at icann.org>>
> Date: Thursday, September 17, 2015 11:14 AM
> To: Christopher Wilkinson <cw at christopherwilkinson.eu 
> <mailto:cw at christopherwilkinson.eu>>
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> Subject: Re: [IAG-WHOIS conflicts] Draft preliminary report
>
> Christopher,
>
> I will do my best to identify your changes.
>
> Regarding your Appendix 3 and other requests to provide a minority 
> statement, it does not seem appropriate to include these in a document 
> on which public comment is sought. Rather, minority statements are 
> incorporated into final reports. At that point, public comments have 
> been considered and the group has identified where there is consensus. 
> It would be appropriate for minority views to be submitted as public 
> comment. If, after taking into account the universe of public 
> comments, these views do not generate consensus support, they would be 
> ripe for attachment to the final report as minority statements.
>
> Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns with this 
> approach. Thank you.
>
> Best,
> Jamie
>
> Jamie Hedlund
> VP, Strategic Programs
> Global Domains Division
> ICANN
> +1.202.374.3969 (m)
> +1.202.570.7125 (d)
> jamie.hedlund at icann.org <mailto:jamie.hedlund at icann.org>
>
> From: Christopher Wilkinson <cw at christopherwilkinson.eu 
> <mailto:cw at christopherwilkinson.eu>>
> Date: Thursday, September 17, 2015 at 14:00
> To: Jamie Hedlund <jamie.hedlund at icann.org 
> <mailto:jamie.hedlund at icann.org>>
> Cc: "whois-iag-volunteers at icann.org 
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> Subject: Re: [IAG-WHOIS conflicts] Draft preliminary report
>
> No, Jamie, there are a number of amendments and additions in the body 
> of the text.
>
> Since your version is in .docx and my edits are in .odt, track changes 
> does not seem to work.
> (I do not know how to do 'red-lining')
>
> I suggest that if you do a 'compare documents' you will get the changes.
>
> Otherwise: Search for 'N.B.'  and for 'applicable'' and you will get 
> most of them.
>
> Regards
>
> CW
>
>
>
>
> On 17 Sep 2015, at 19:50, Jamie Hedlund <jamie.hedlund at icann.org 
> <mailto:jamie.hedlund at icann.org>> wrote:
>
>> Christopher,
>>
>> Thank you. Could you please confirm that the only change you made to 
>> the base text was the addition of Appendix 3? Since the document is 
>> not redlined I wanted to make sure we captured your proposed edits. 
>> Thanks again.
>>
>> Best,
>> Jamie
>>
>> Jamie Hedlund
>> VP, Strategic Programs
>> Global Domains Division
>> ICANN
>> +1.202.374.3969 (m)
>> +1.202.570.7125 (d)
>> jamie.hedlund at icann.org <mailto:jamie.hedlund at icann.org>
>>
>> From: Christopher Wilkinson <cw at christopherwilkinson.eu 
>> <mailto:cw at christopherwilkinson.eu>>
>> Date: Thursday, September 17, 2015 at 13:24
>> To: Jamie Hedlund <jamie.hedlund at icann.org 
>> <mailto:jamie.hedlund at icann.org>>
>> Cc: "whois-iag-volunteers at icann.org 
>> <mailto:whois-iag-volunteers at icann.org>" 
>> <whois-iag-volunteers at icann.org <mailto:whois-iag-volunteers at icann.org>>
>> Subject: Re: [IAG-WHOIS conflicts] Draft preliminary report
>>
>> Good evening:
>>
>> Please find attached my edits to the draft preliminary report.
>>
>> With many thanks for your attention
>>
>> Regards
>>
>> Christopher Wilkinson
>>
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