[Ws2-jurisdiction] OFAC Recommendation -- Further Suggested Revisions

[Kavouss Arasteh]

Dear Greg,
TOP URGENT
I disagree with your course of action removing the pargraph that was
included in the final draft.
We have not made such decision for  removal
One participant who was not attending the 16 Sept later on did not like the
language but he did not proposed its removal
Moreover, based on comments reveived after the meeting you were not
authorized to unilaterlly remove a paragraph which was included -
If the language in that pargraph to be softened , I am reay to discuss that
but not unilateral removal of the full paragraph.
Your authority is limited to conduc the meeting but bnot to decide for evry
b ody.
Pls immediate re insert that pargraph and either redicuss it or send it to
CCWG Plenary
Regards
Kavouss

On Wed, Sep 20, 2017 at 8:15 AM, Kavouss Arasteh <kavouss.arasteh at gmail.com>
wrote:

> Dear Greg
> Tks for the doc.
> Surprisingly I saw that that you have unilaterally removed the last
> paragraph that I have added and commented by Paul Rosenweig
> As I mentioned we can soften the langauge such as replacement of "MUST" by
> "should" as well as few other area to soften the language but I do not
> agree that you reomove that entire paragraph since somebody did not like
> that.
> This is a multistakeholder approach and view of everybody must be taken
> into account.
> Consequently there is no consensus in the draft you have declared as
> finalized pls reconsider the matter.
> Regards
> kvouss
>
> On Mon, Sep 18, 2017 at 7:42 PM, Greg Shatan <gregshatanipc at gmail.com>
> wrote:
>
>> All,
>>
>> I have attached a further revised OFAC Recommendation, reflecting changes
>> suggested by Kavouss Arasteh and Seun Ojedeji.  Word and PDF versions are
>> attached, and the Google Doc reflects these suggested changes as well.
>>
>> I look forward to our call.
>>
>> Best regards,
>>
>> Greg
>>
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