[Ws2-transparency] Comments on latest drat report

[McAuley, David]

Dear members of the Transparency Subgroup,



Attached in a Word document are my comments to the latest draft document we are working on.



Best wishes to all,

David



David McAuley

International Policy Manager

Verisign Inc.

703-948-4154



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