[Ws2-transparency] Draft revisions

[Michael Karanicolas]

Apologies - I replied to David earlier, but I see now I didn't hit reply-all.

Just to add to what Chris said, this draft has addressed the revisions
that we discussed in the last call, and stuck to the specific wording
that was agreed on, including regarding the human rights footnote.

However, I hadn't planned on flagging the human rights question
specifically, since I feel the Recommendations are more important to
focus on, and there will plenty of reps from the human rights subgroup
who I'm sure will speak up if they feel there's an issue there
(though, of course, if there are any errors or concerns, please feel
free to let us know).

Best,

Michael

On Wed, Jan 11, 2017 at 12:45 PM, Wilson, Christopher <cwilson at 21cf.com> wrote:
> David,
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> Bernie sent out the latest draft yesterday (among other subgroups’ work) to
> the full CCWG at 16:10 p.m. ET.  See also the attached.  It includes the FN
> re human rights and a sentence anticipating ICANN’s input.  I believe
> Michael will acknowledge these items on the call later today.  If there
> continues to be concerns, please let us know.
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> -Chris
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> [mailto:ws2-transparency-bounces at icann.org] On Behalf Of McAuley, David
> Sent: Wednesday, January 11, 2017 9:17 AM
> To: ws2-transparency at icann.org
> Subject: [Ws2-transparency] Draft revisions
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> Michael, Chris:
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> I have not seen a new draft reflecting revisions discussed last Friday (e.g.
> footnote relating to Human Rights; anticipating ICANN’s input).
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> How do you plan to handle these matters at CCWG plenary. I could comment on
> the HR issue but if the footnote has been revised I may not need to.
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> Best regards,
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> David
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> David McAuley
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