[cc-humanrights] Draft presentations GAC & Constituencies

[Niels ten Oever]

Thanks you Stephanie and the others that commented on the Skype channel,
please find the updated version attached.

Best,

Niels

Niels ten Oever
Head of Digital

Article 19
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On 06/21/2015 01:33 PM, Stephanie Perrin wrote:
> Since it is PDFed, I cannot edit.  Here are my Comments:
> 1.  ON the title page it would be great if you could identify yourself
> as NCSG.
> 2.  The fine print is way, way too small.  The ownership/authorship of
> those reports must be more prominent, and at least legible.
> Title or topic of report in a couple of words would be helpful,
> particularly to non-english speakers
> 5.  Get rid of the blank space, put an apostrophe in ICANN's
> Since we will be referring to the Ruggies principles, it might be good
> to add that to this slide (bullet one) again, to help folks follow the
> discussion better.
> 6.  I am a little worried that this last slide looks too
> ambitious.....but if the group feels our community is ready for it, damn
> the torpedoes.  IMHO, we are not ready yet....
> Thanks Niels for the opportunity to comment!
> Stephanie
> On 2015-06-21 11:41, Niels ten Oever wrote:
>> Hi all,
>>
>> I've been asked to give an overview of our CCWP work at the GAC WG and
>> at several constituencies, for this I made a draft presentation. Please
>> find it attached. Looking forward to hear what you think.
>>
>> The presentations should take a maximum of 15 minutes, including Q&A, so
>> I'd like to keep it short. Let me know if you thing something is missing
>> or should be reformulated.
>>
>> I'll also work on a presentation of the report for Wednesdays session, I
>> will send that to you when it's ready for comments.
>>
>> Looking forward to hear from you.
>>
>> Best,
>>
>> Niels
>>
>>
>>
>>
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