[DT-F] Fwd: Revised section III.A.iii.a

[Alan Greenberg]

Comments PLEASE. This is a substantive revision from the previous 
version and we are under strong pressure to finalize the text for the 
CWG Proposal publication.

Alan


>Date: Tue, 02 Jun 2015 02:23:53 -0400
>To: CWG DT-F <cwg-dtf at icann.org>
>From: Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca>
>Subject: Revised section III.A.iii.a
>
>Attached is a revision of the DTF section (III.A.iii.a) of the CWG proposal.
>
>In the previous version, that section and Annex N were at times 
>inconsistent or confusing. I have merged the two and Annex N is no 
>longer required. This has made for a longer section in the body of 
>the report, but given the timing and need for precision, there does 
>not seem to be a viable alternative.
>
>I believe that this incorporates all of the changes we have 
>discussed and addresses most of the issues raised in the public 
>comment. In some cases, as I was drafting this document, I altered 
>how I responded to the specific comments from what I and Chuck 
>discussed in our earlier e-mails, but I think the result still 
>follows the intent.
>
>Alan
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