[DT-F] Fwd: Revised section III.A.iii.a

[David Conrad]

Alan,

Will provide comments today.

Regards,
-drc

-----Original Message-----
From: Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca>
Date: Tuesday, June 2, 2015 at 8:10 PM
To: CWG DT-F <cwg-dtf at icann.org>
Subject: [DT-F] Fwd: Revised section III.A.iii.a

>Comments PLEASE. This is a substantive revision from the previous
>version and we are under strong pressure to finalize the text for the
>CWG Proposal publication.
>
>Alan
>
>
>>Date: Tue, 02 Jun 2015 02:23:53 -0400
>>To: CWG DT-F <cwg-dtf at icann.org>
>>From: Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca>
>>Subject: Revised section III.A.iii.a
>>
>>Attached is a revision of the DTF section (III.A.iii.a) of the CWG
>>proposal.
>>
>>In the previous version, that section and Annex N were at times
>>inconsistent or confusing. I have merged the two and Annex N is no
>>longer required. This has made for a longer section in the body of
>>the report, but given the timing and need for precision, there does
>>not seem to be a viable alternative.
>>
>>I believe that this incorporates all of the changes we have
>>discussed and addresses most of the issues raised in the public
>>comment. In some cases, as I was drafting this document, I altered
>>how I responded to the specific comments from what I and Chuck
>>discussed in our earlier e-mails, but I think the result still
>>follows the intent.
>>
>>Alan
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