[CWG-RFP3] Proposed Redline to Strawman 1

[Duchesneau, Stephanie]

Hi All,

Please find attached a redline, suggesting changes and additions to Greg's Strawman 1 model. The strawman reflects input from several gTLD registry representatives to this group. As the redline is fairly heavy, I have incorporated a clean version as well as a version that tracks all changes made to the original version that Greg provided. The draft also includes some comments on a few of the areas that will require further thought and development.

I will also work to reflect these recommendations in the Google Docs that compares the strawmen. We encourage members of this group to review this document and provide any feedback on the updated strawman.

Best.

Stephanie
Stephanie Duchesneau
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