[Gnso-newgtld-wg-wt5] Draft Initial Report - Final Review - deadline Monday 26 November

[Justine Chew]

Hi Emily,

Thank you (and to the co-leaders) for the opportunity for a final review.

Attached is the 19 Nov draft with my comments, containing feedback on the
redlined text and some queries for clarification, proposed text edits (as
requested) along with a number of typographical error corrections for your
attention.

Kind regards,

Justine Chew
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On Tue, 20 Nov 2018 at 03:32, Emily Barabas <emily.barabas at icann.org> wrote:

> Dear Work Track 5 members,
>
>
>
> Thanks to those who submitted comments on the Initial Report prior to the
> deadline and those who provided input on our most recent call (if you
> missed the call, please review the call records at
> https://community.icann.org/x/yxm8BQ). As a reminder, the deadline for
> comments -- Friday 16 November -- has now passed. Please find attached an
> updated draft of the Initial Report. Please note that this is a staff draft
> and additional comments may come in from the co-leaders over the mailing
> list. In this version, you will see that older redline changes have been
> accepted and resolved comments have been removed. The draft only highlights
> with redline and comments the latest inputs – those received following the
> 7 November call.
>
>
>
> The initial plan was to publish the Initial Report tomorrow, but the
> co-leaders would like to give the Work Track an additional week to review
> the new edits. *The deadline for final review is Monday 26 November at
> 23:59 UTC. At this stage, please limit your comments to any objections to
> or concerns about the new redlines. Please do not open new substantive
> discussions or raise new issues to include in the report*. All are
> welcome to submit input during the public comment period. There will also
> be additional opportunity for WT discussion following the public comment
> period.
>
>
>
> The next WT5 call is scheduled to take place on Wednesday 28 November. If
> there are outstanding items that need to be discussed further before
> publication of the report, the co-leaders will use this call to address
> them. The aim is still to publish the Initial Report before the end of
> November. The leadership team appreciates everyone’s support in working
> towards this goal.
>
>
>
> Kind regards,
>
> Emily
>
>
>
> *Emily Barabas *| Policy Manager
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> *ICANN* | Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers
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> Email: emily.barabas at icann.org | Phone: +31 (0)6 84507976
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