[GNSO-RPM-WG] Proposed Agenda for RPM Meeting on Wednesday, 26 February 2020 at 18:00-19:30 UTC

Tue Feb 25 16:50:24 UTC 2020

Sounds like a run-on sentence to me.

Zak are you OK with this:

There was general support in the Working Group for publishing this proposal
in the Initial Report to seek public comment, with some Working Group
members supporting the proposal as drafted. However, some Working Group
members expressed opposition, in terms of both substance and
implementation, including the proposed remedies and the definitions of
“repeat offender” and “high volume cybersquatting”.

On Tue, Feb 25, 2020 at 10:53 AM Zak Muscovitch <zak at muscovitch.com> wrote:

> Sure, Brian.
>
>
> Here is what I believe was the original text:
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> There was general support in the Working Group for publishing this
> proposal in the Initial Report to seek public comment. Some Working Group
> members expressed practical concerns about implementing the proposal.
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>
> And here is the proposed revised text:
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> While there was general support in the Working Group for publishing this
> proposal in the Initial Report to seek public comment, and some Working
> Group members were in favor of the Individual Proposal as drafted, some
> Working Group members expressed substantial and serious concerns with both
> the Individual Proposal’s proposed definition of “repeat offender” and of
> “high volume cybersquatting”, as well as the proposed new remedies, and
> indicated that they were opposed to the Individual Proposal in substance
> and had practical concerns about implementing the proposal.
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> Zak
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> *From:* BECKHAM, Brian <brian.beckham at wipo.int>
> *Sent:* February-25-20 10:42 AM
> *To:* Zak Muscovitch <zak at muscovitch.com>; Julie Hedlund <
> julie.hedlund at icann.org>; gnso-rpm-wg at icann.org
> *Subject:* RE: Proposed Agenda for RPM Meeting on Wednesday, 26 February
> 2020 at 18:00-19:30 UTC
>
>
>
> Thanks Zak for this proposal in advance of tomorrow’s meeting.
>
>
>
> I wonder if you could confirm that I am reading this revised doc onscreen
> correctly.
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> It seems that you have added an introductory “While” (so instead of:
>  “There was…” it now reads:  “While there was…”) and then the clause “and
> some Working Group members were in favor of the Individual Proposal as
> drafted…”
>
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>
> If that’s right, these seem like unobjectionable clarifications.
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> If not, would you be able to point out the proposed added / deleted text.
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> There also seem to be a few missing connecting words towards the end (“and
> had”) so that it should read:  “…in substance [and had] practical concerns
> about implementing the proposal.”
>
>
>
> Just checking, and thanks again!
>
>
>
> Brian
>
>
>
> *From:* GNSO-RPM-WG <gnso-rpm-wg-bounces at icann.org> *On Behalf Of *Zak
> Muscovitch
> *Sent:* Tuesday, February 25, 2020 4:24 PM
> *To:* Julie Hedlund <julie.hedlund at icann.org>; gnso-rpm-wg at icann.org
> *Subject:* Re: [GNSO-RPM-WG] Proposed Agenda for RPM Meeting on
> Wednesday, 26 February 2020 at 18:00-19:30 UTC
>
>
>
> Just FYI, although I was loathe to propose revisions, I took another look
> at the “Working Group Deliberation” section with regards to Individual
> Proposal #15, and proposed in the Google Doc some revised language
> describing my sense of the WG’s deliberations on this issue, which I think
> were not entirely reflective of the WG’s deliberation in this instance.
>
>
>
> New proposed wording:
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>
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> *Working Group Deliberation*: While there was general support in the
> Working Group for publishing this proposal in the Initial Report to seek
> public comment, and some Working Group members were in favor of the
> Individual Proposal as drafted, some Working Group members expressed
> substantial and serious concerns with both the Individual Proposal’s
> proposed definition of “repeat offender” and of “high volume
> cybersquatting”, as well as the proposed new remedies and indicated that
> they were opposed to the Individual Proposal as drafted in substance.
>
>
>
>
>
> Zak
>
>
>
>
>
> Muscovitch Law P.C.
>
> zak at muscovitch.com
>
> 1-866-654-7129
>
> 416-924-5084
>
> http://www.trademarks-canada.com/
>
> https://www.muscovitch.com/
>
> https://dnattorney.com/
>
>
>
>
>
> *From:* GNSO-RPM-WG <gnso-rpm-wg-bounces at icann.org> *On Behalf Of *Julie
> Hedlund
> *Sent:* February-24-20 1:26 PM
> *To:* gnso-rpm-wg at icann.org
> *Subject:* [GNSO-RPM-WG] Proposed Agenda for RPM Meeting on Wednesday, 26
> February 2020 at 18:00-19:30 UTC
>
>
>
> Dear RPM WG members,
>
>
>
> Please find the proposed agenda and materials below for the WG meeting on
> Wednesday, 26 February 2020 at 18:00-19:30 UTC.
>
>
>
> *As is the GNSO's practice, the document is being circulated for the
> purpose of ensuring that WG members are comfortable with the format and
> overall coverage of the recommendations and deliberations. Please remember
> that the Initial Report is meant to focus on specific
> recommendations/proposals, with brief, relevant, accompanying rationale,
> rather than be a comprehensive record of the WG's deliberations.  *
>
>
>
> *WG members are reminded that comments in the Google docs should be
> limited only to error corrections that you believe are necessary.**  The
> documents will be open for comment until COB Tuesday, 25 February.  After
> that time they will be closed to comment.  While they are closed comments
> will not be visible, but they will be displayed during the WG meeting.*
>
>
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> Draft Proposed Agenda:
>
>    1. Review Agenda and Updates to Statements of Interest
>    2. ICANN67 Status
>    3. Review Revisions from Action Items: TMCH Individual Proposals for
>    which the Working Group is Seeking Input:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fh6KnBvqH78Pmo7qUBtR3JyIIvUifJ-8hzX9dcJruuA/edit?usp=sharing
>    [docs.google.com]
>    <https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__docs.google.com_document_d_1fh6KnBvqH78Pmo7qUBtR3JyIIvUifJ-2D8hzX9dcJruuA_edit-3Fusp-3Dsharing&d=DwMGaQ&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=adDIs0WEx_lLwFfrsdovxTYY8GkRHo5ibc8SR3Npdh8&m=pHx2VgLeBUkGzKocmXOoBBhL4753w_2vn37aRHMG6mE&s=wMO-1FtvuW_B3Am7MC4vVwZ03d5TeTRZSNjheGu7Wi8&e=>
>    4. Finalize Discussion of Deliberations of the Working Group: URS
>    Individual Proposals:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kHBPLtbp6BgqmxZGPHC1Yeciulvvk79niPOuURI8L5U/edit?usp=sharing
>    [docs.google.com]
>    <https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__docs.google.com_document_d_1kHBPLtbp6BgqmxZGPHC1Yeciulvvk79niPOuURI8L5U_edit-3Fusp-3Dsharing&d=DwMGaQ&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=adDIs0WEx_lLwFfrsdovxTYY8GkRHo5ibc8SR3Npdh8&m=nXgVSaMtCITwPJxg7gWJGMiOEAeZJxi27vm2v-ZaGlQ&s=uUfbnYym6VWBHpPINrqXaYW-40q2nYJK4gkMnFiIC78&e=> –
>    Start at Proposal #16
>    5. Review Project Change Request and Revised Work Plan (attached)
>    6. AOB
>
>
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> Best Regards,
>
> Mary, Julie, Ariel
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