[Gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl] Draft principles - comments

[Marika Konings]

As requested by Chuck, please find attached an updated version of the draft
principles documents in which comments have now been listed under each
principle (note, I've added a couple of responses to Chuck's replies). If
you have any additional comments, please use the attached version to add
these.

Thanks,

Marika

From:  <Gomes>, Chuck Gomes <cgomes at verisign.com>
Date:  Tuesday 10 December 2013 02:17
To:  Nic Steinbach <nic at name.com>
Cc:  Marika Konings <marika.konings at icann.org>,
"gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl at icann.org" <gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl at icann.org>
Subject:  RE: [Gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl] Draft principles - comments

Thanks a lot Nic.  Rather to add more comments, I will try to respond in my
message.
 
Regarding principle 2, you said in your comment (NS3): ³Is there an
objective criteria for this?  I agree in principle to this principle, but
this exception seems like it has the potential for abuse if left this broad.
Maybe something like ³except where there is broad community consensus that
there is an emergency case related to security and/or stability²²  The
problem as I see it with your suggestion is that if there is an emergency
SSR issue, there is not time to check for community consensus.  Maybe we
could add something though like this: ³except in emergency cases such as
risks to security and stability as defined in ICANN¹s SSR framework².
 
In your comment on principle 3 (NS5), you said that you ³Agree with this
opinion².  What opinion do you agree with?  I got the impression that you
agree with the principle regardless of whether it differs with the current
PDP manual.  Is that correct?
 
Before I respond to your other comments, let me suggest that we restructure
the list of principles so that there is only one per page so that there will
hopefully be room for all comments under each principle.  Marika/Mary ­
would you be able to do that?  If not, I can try to do it tomorrow.
 
Chuck
 
From: Nic Steinbach [mailto:nic at name.com]
Sent: Monday, December 09, 2013 6:51 PM
To: Gomes, Chuck
Cc: Marika Konings; gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl at icann.org
Subject: Re: [Gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl] Draft principles - comments
 

Hello All, 

 

Marika and Chuck thanks for your work. I am attaching my comments that
incorporate Marika's initial feedback. Unfortunately, I somehow missed
Chuck's responses. Currently reviewing them now, but wanted to get these out
to the group.  

 

Best, 

 

Nic

 

On Mon, Dec 9, 2013 at 8:35 AM, Gomes, Chuck <cgomes at verisign.com> wrote:

Thanks Marika.  I inserted some responses to your comments to continue the
discussion.  Hopefully, others will add their comments as well.  Discussing
the issues you identified will make for a good agenda item for our first
call(s).
 
Chuck
 

From:gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl-bounces at icann.org
[mailto:gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl-bounces at icann.org] On Behalf Of Marika
Konings
Sent: Monday, December 09, 2013 7:46 AM
To: gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl at icann.org
Subject: [Gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl] Draft principles - comments

 

To kick things off, I've added a couple of comments / questions as well as
proposed edits to the draft provided by Chuck (see attached).

 

Best regards,

 

Marika

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