[rssac-caucus] FOR REVIEW: DRAFT RSSAC002 Version 2

[Warren Kumari]

Hi,

I've made some (purely editorial / readability) edits / comments.
Feel free to incorporate or ignore.

W




On Tue, Nov 17, 2015 at 3:06 PM Steve Sheng <steve.sheng at icann.org> wrote:

> Dear RSSAC Caucus,
>
>   Attached please find RSSAC002 version 2 for your review. In this
> version, we made the following changes based on the RSSAC caucus
> discussions led by Duane:
>
>    - Section 2.2 (The size of the overall root zone) was amended to
>    clarify that TCP size prefix octets are not included in the metric.
>    - Section 2.4 (The query and response size distribution) was amended
>    to clarify that TCP size prefix octets are not included in these metrics.
>    - Section 2.4 was amended to include 0-15 in size ranges to be
>    tabulated.
>    - Superfluous quotes around YAML keys were removed from example YAML
>    in sections 4.1 (The ‘load-time’ Metric) and 4.2 (The ‘zone-size’ Metric).
>    - Indentation was fixed for example YAML in sections 4.3 (The
>    ‘traffic-volume’ Metric) and 4.6 (The ‘unique-sources’ Metric).
>    - Section 4.5 (The ‘rcode-volume’ Metric) was amended to clarify that
>    nonzero counts should be omitted.
>
>
>   In addition, we made the following organizational changes:
>
>    - Make this document RSSAC002 version 2
>    - Added a Revision History section (see section 7).
>
>
>   Attached please find the redline, clean word and PDF version. Since the
> proposed revisions have already been discussed and agreed on the caucus
> list, we will give this update a 7 day additional review period. Please
> provide your feedback, if any, no later than 23 November 2015. After that,
> this document will be sent to RSSAC for formal action.
>
> Best,
> Steve
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